Logarithm, maybe you call mine guide "essay", but it's "essay", that might be helpful, because I can add plenty of items short described, but really, i don't want it. I just tell peoples things, that might be useful on Fiora, and nothing more ^^

It used to be empty, now there's walls of text.

Listen, when we were talking about how short this is, we weren't asking for an essay. All you need to do is neatly describe your build in an organized, logical manner. Seriously, just look at any top rated guide and you'll see what I mean.

This guide ISN'T BAD, its just poorly made.

yup, maybe you have right. But i dont think, that mine guide is useless because if players take champion on first time, they arent looking on in depth builds. They just want to kniw, what skill should be maximized first, what runes champion need, and what items should be bougth. And thats all that matters. But anyway, thanks for advices, Im gonna expand this guide soon, so dont blame me now :P

Too short to be useful to anyone. -1.

Almost completely empty. Not a single item is explained. Not to say your build is bad, but what about stuff like Last Whisper? Mercury's Treads? Doran's Blade?

It looks like a forum post, not a guide. -1

i'm sorry, i hate to have to say it, but you seem completely lost. more so than I ever was.

I'll put it this way:
Read this guide.

Also, don't publish without finishing- it's bad rep. Another thing is that you reference another guide in here. 1: You need to ask first and 2: it just hurts the guide.

Wtf? This isn't even anywhere near complete.

I will expand mine guide if i will have time, so you can expect anything :D