New Champion Idea: Max, The Puppet Puppeteer

[quote=smKrash]Please give feedback pros and cons Lore: Max,12 years old now, is poorly treated by many of the costumers at the bar because he is a puppet. Every night he got teased by all the Noxians at the bar his master owned. But one day, his master left the elixir that animated Max 12 years ago, out on the stage. Due to his drunkeness Max took that potion and altered it into a "poison" which he poured into his master's drink the next morning, but what he made was a potion that turned his master into a puppet. But this puppet was unlike any other because he had many deadly tricks. So Max trained to control his newly found puppet named Master and used it to terrorize the Noxians who terrorized him. "I never thought I'd live to see the day a puppet controlling a puppet has come to kill me" -Darius Stats Max/Master Health: 450 (+50 per lvl)/ 700 (+50 per lvl) Mana: 300 (+50 per lvl)/ none Physical Attack: 60 (+2.2 per lvl) / 40 (+2.2 per lvl) Attack Speed: .7 / .8 Movement: 360 / moves with Max Armor: 30 (+4 per lvl) / 60 (+4 per lvl) Magic Resistance: 30 (+4 per lvl) / 60 (+4 per lvl) Max auto attacks are melee, but with Master he has more range for his auto attack because he can auto attack with master though both are melee he can deal ranged melee damage with master, if master is alive. Top laner, possible jungler Item build: Frozen Mallet Arch Angel's Staff Rylai's Crystal Sector Ice Gauntlets etc sorry havent given much thought on items Passive: Friend with Benefits All abilities and attacks are solely based around Master until Master gets destroyed then abilities base around Max. Master passively gains Magic Resist and Armor the longer it is alive Maxing at 100 more than original Armor and Magic Resist. Upon death Max gains a fourth of Masters Armor and Magic Resist. Once Master is remade (3 minute after death) then the bonus Armor and Magic Resist is no longer granted and Master again stacks Armor and Magic Resist. Stacks 5 Armor and Magic Resist after 30 sec, at ten minute if master hasn't died he would have roughly (160) Armor and Magic Resist. Also enemies that pass through the string attaching Master to Max will get slowed and damaged(this slow will slow 10% and can only affect the same target every 15 seconds the damage will deal 10 at level 1 and 100 at level 18 and the same target can only be damaged every 30 seconds) All abilities with Master has more range similar to Orianna and her ball, Master is like Orianna's ball. All abilities with Master deals less damage than with Max All abilities with Master have lesser cooldown that Max Master deals stronger auto attack damage than Max Max's ultamate is the only ability that defies this Max deals less damage, and has a dramatically decreased range to catch people his range is maybe a little smaller than Orianna's ult, but Masters ult range is a little larger than Orianna's ult Q-Strike Mana Cost: 20/20/20/20/20 Cooldown: 5/4/3/2/1.5 Max cooldown: 7/6/5/4/3 Maxs sends Master to target location damaging all along his path (like oriannas ball) /If Master is dead then Max moves to target location damaging all in path (like graves dash forward) W-Encase Mana Cost: 50/60/70/80/90 Cooldown: 8/7/6/5/4 Max Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6 Slow: 16/17/18/19/20 (%) Max Slow: 21/22/23/24/25 (%) Length of slow: 1/1.5/2/2.5/3 Length of slow: 2.5/3/3.5/4/4.5 Max maneuvers Master to let out string slowing and damaging all enemies in the surrounding area/If Master is dead then Max encases surrounding area with string damaging and slowing enemies hit by it (both like orianna ult except lesser area) E-Tangle Mana Cost: 70/80/90/100/110 Cooldown: 9/8/7/6/5 Max cooldown: 11/10/9/8/7 Snare length: .5/1/1.5/2/2.5 Max Snare length: 1/1.5/2/2.5/3 Max maneuvers Master onto an enemy and tangle that enemy with string damaging them and snaring them in place (like veigar Q)/If Master dead then Max throws string (skill shot) in direction if it hits someone then they are snared in place R-Vengeful Puppeteer Mana Cost: 100/150/200 Cooldown: 120/110/95 If used with Max cooldown: 100/90/75 Length of hold: 9 sec Max length of hold: 11 sec Max sends Master to target location. When reached destination unleashes a giant web of string that will grab hold of all nearby enemy champions damaging them and not allowing them to leave a certain radius from Master (if master is destroyed during this ability then the ults effects ware off) Max can reactivate this ability to pull all the enemy champion into Master damaging them again and slowing by 15% (slow is same for both Max and Master. If Master is dead then Max will unleash a giant web of string (not moving to target location first) grabbing hold of enemies. (same concept as Master, but less range and damage) On the recast to pull enemies in after enemies are pulled in and slowed the hold is released can use abilities while holding unto enemies but damage from both Master and Max deal less damage. Quotes he would say: When you select him: "Well Master we can win if you follow my lead" Taunt: "The last person who tried to control turned out to be a real piece of work" "You call that an attack, I meet puppets who hit harder than you" Joke: You...you look a little stiff When commanded to move: You're commanding me again sigh...I guess Attacking: Let's get em Master Fight with a bond like no other[/quote]