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Olaf: A ruthless Viking Top Lane
Build Guide By Heroslayer
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Olaf Build Guide By Heroslayer
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Olaf Build Guide By Heroslayer
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Olaf: A ruthless Viking Top Lane
1. No comment to vote
2. So much purchase orders, can't you just make a "starting items -> first recall -> core -> pick one of these -> final build -> alternatives" kind of thing? much more structured :D
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4. Poor use of structure
5. Rediculous chapter order, put "pros and cons" as the second chapter and put the "skill sequence" and "spells" before the item section.
6. "9/21 Masteries are best on Olaf. Some would say 21/9 which might work in the laning phase but in team fights you won't be tanky enough to survive long enough to take down your target." You made a chapter for that? Better explain a bit more...
Thy blessing
1. Overal, decent builds
2. 'k use of coding
3. All basics included
Result: Path of Redemption
The guide is so badly structured, it is unbelievable.
For starters, your pictures do not go well with your text.
Put the text UNDER the picture or NEXT to the picture, but not both, because it looks rediculous.
The pictures are mostly also waay to big, especially with the matchups section.
Some other things you can work on aswell, I recommend you do that asap.
Have fun :D
Look
Formatting: Displacement, wall of text here and there. -1
Chapters: Messed chapter order, but has all the chapters needed. 0
Ornaments: Please don't make entirely colored texts, it's disturbing. Missplaced oversized images make the whole thing messy. -1
Readability: Repeating myself... too messy. -1
Content
Masteries: Not bad mastery, but again chapter is pretty useless... 0
Spells: Weird sequence on cheat sheet, make the explanation more visible. Finally a chapter that is worthy, just make it more appealing. +1
Items: Nice items, the chapters are fine, just do something with those large icons. +1
Gameplay: Seems good. Honestly i didn't read the whole thing but it seems good what i read, just change the entirely colored text blocks. +1
Other
Final Score
+0.5Not enough for an upvote, but not a downvote either. Improve on the points above and you cna make it into an upvote. Feel free to PM if you have any questions.
Btw, do 2 of these: [[ (i'll use ; as an example)
then an item ;;atma's impaler;;
will result in
Has potential, needs fixing up.