+1 It is a good Sion guide only thing that I don't understand is while jungling taking your stun at lvl 4, I would take it earlier but it's just me :P.

Good guide, I just disagree with the lack of attack speed in the bruiser build. Sion has ridicilous amounts of free ad, yet you build even more ad and no attack speed..

Pros

• Looks pretty good

• Looks viable

• Comment to vote

• Good Cheatsheet

• Sion isn't very common

Cons

• Farm, farm, farm, needs more team-play stuff

Notes
An alright guide that is for a undead and unplayed champion.

Result
+1

I will only say what was already said:

+In depth bulids
+Explanation on why to bulid certain items,also explained masteries and runes(but as I made a math in my guide you should grab crit marks ^^
+Basics of jungling and farming explained
+Basic things about Sion explained aswell

-Complete lack of in-depth data about playing Sion(i know,you mentioned that at the start,but still)
-No "how to lane" section

I would rate it for hmm maybe 7/10,it deserves.

• Very In-depth builds
• Decent layout and structure
• Good explanation behind items/skills/runes, etc

• Add more spaces between pictures and text
• Make item/mastery pictures bigger
• Break apart Offensive/Defensive items
• Add Jungle/Team synergies section
• No Laning advice
• No combos listed / advice on how best to use abilities in fights
• No matchups section

Imo, this is a good guide that deserves to become a great one. Though you do list that this guide is aimed at more experienced players that already understand Sion and his mechanics, the point of Mobafire builds is to appeal and cater to as wide a audience as possible; as such, you need advice/tips for seasoned veterans as well as beginners. Some starters would be a chapter on how best to utilize Sion in top lane (combo's, harass, etc). A top-lane matchup section would also be a good idea to help people out. And though not entirely necessary, a jungle synergy section (how to counter certain junglers, which junglers counter him) would be a nice touch. You should also expand on jungler section (ie. pics of routes), while also covering warding/good ward locations. As for your builds themselves though, they're some of the most in-depth and detailed I've seen on Mobafire, and all your item choices are thoroughly covered. If you just improve your format/layout a little and go more in-depth on certain things, this can become a truly great guide. It definitely deserves to be higher up.

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Final Analysis:

Content: 3/5
Cheat Sheet: 5/5
Coding/Appearance: 3/5
Knowledge: 4/5

Final Score: 15/20
Vote: +1

I appreciate the review, but I must remind you that my opening chapter states that this guide goes on the assumption that the readers already understand how to play Sion, which means I will not be going into great depth on how to play him.

Here is your requested review.

Content: 6/10
You've covered the basics, and you get brownie points for elaborating on all your choices specifically for Sion. HOWEVER, you don't go into how he should be played in the game. You really need to cover his gameplay and laning phases. You should probably add in matchups, synergies, or some other information on how to play him. Maybe a combo section perhaps. You've told us what his abilities are, but you haven't told us HOW to use them with each other in fights. I think you have a great potential to do this since you've made his items and other things personalized.

Appearance: 4/10
There are next to no graphics and your bb coding is minimal. Your cheat sheet is awkward and large. Pros & Cons are okay. It's not a visually appealing guide, but I can see that you at least tried.

The Bad
You don't actually tell us how to play Sion. Your guide isn't aesthetically pleasing.

The Good
Your items and runes are very personalized to Sion, which most guides don't do. I'm glad you go through and explain why all of these items are good items for him specifically.

Final Grade: 5/10. I won't be voting on your guide, but make some improvements and come back if you want to!

Thy sins
1. I know that Sion has a passive that grants bonus health n stuff, but if you want to take Juggernaut , you really need to build health in order to make it worth it. Also: Legendary armor
2. Utility mastery picture has failed, also coding error in the summary
3. "NEVER STOP! KEEP Enrage ACTIVATED AT ALL TIMES! FARM WHENEVER POSSIBLE!" This is fun and all, but I myself for example, farm a bit too much when playing Sion, maybe explain when you should farm and when you should be with your team :D

Thy blessing
1. Overal build is okay
2. Well structured cheatsheet
3. All basics included
4. Decent use of structure + coding
5. Comment to vote is on

Result: Path of the Student
It's a decent guide, but again I feel like more can be added to it.
Make sure you fix your coding errors and make sure that you make your guide stand out a bit more ;D

I upvoted nevertheless, because it still deserves more than 50%

Have fun :D

(Do not forget to vote! :D)

Enable voting to comment so you dont get those random downvotes. (Though I did upvote)

Have you worked out a path to farm the most health with his E in the jungle?