Yo. I play very little, next to nothing with Trynda. I can't say much anything, but:

- I think botrk is almost a core
- Left side of offense tree is pretty useless for Trynda
- Frozen mallet isn't worth even as a situational
- Zephyr is much more useful when it's taken earlier, I would replace boots with it possibly, but not take as a last item

Liked the banner a lot btw :p

Good luck with the guide!

About the Cheat Sheet just simplify it and make it easier to understand. For example "Swap your Cutlass for one of these" is unnecessary. You can explain when to get Hydra, Blade or BT in the items chapter. There's no need to add all of them in one section of the Cheat Sheet. Tryndamere's itemization is very plain and simple in my opinion. He just needs his core items and after that it's w/e for him because he can do his job just with his core items. The other items are just luxuries.

The irrelevant content is helpful. There's no way I can deny that. But like I said it's irrelevant to the guide itself. If it was me I would take that information and make a whole new guide with it for unexperienced players. But yeah that's just a suggestion from me. You do what you think is best for your guide. I am only a reviewer who gives advice and nothing more :P

Good luck with the match-ups chapter.

Thanks a lot for your review :). Now I will review your review!


Appearance: I understand your concern about the drops of blood. I have had mixed comments on them, some say they enjoy it while others find them too flashy and very distracting. But nonetheless I am going to keep them. I find them very interesting and feel that they cooperate well with Tryndamere and his playstyle.

Cheatsheet: This is a first. Do you mind explaining what you would like to see as a replacement for the cheatsheet? Hopefully this way we can both get what we want :)/

Viabilty: This is my other section that has gotten mixed comments. I focus the guide more on laning Tryndamere but as you can see I do explain Jungle Tryndamere. And to be honest, I find that jungle Tryndamere is good... but only in normals. Jungle Tryndamere is not meant to be played in ranked games, many people know that. But for the sake of people who do not play ranked lots and play mostly normals I have added jungle Tryndamere. And what you said is completely true, and that is why you do not see a lot of jungling Tryndamere's now a days.

Tidiness: Thank you

Spelling Mistakes: I recently fixed all of them (hopefully) and thanks you again for noticing.

Content: Yea I have LOTS of irrelevant content, but that is who I am. When I explain things I always do this sort of thing, where I talk about on thing and have the need to explain more, even the most basic of information. But even though it is irrelevant, there are still many people who can use help and learn more. Zoning for example is a good example. There are tons of people who don't know top lane right and can mess their experience up for them, so I wanted to teach them how they can do it right. Basically what I am trying to say is that this guide is not meant for just experienced LoL players but for EVERY LoL player. I apologize if you did find it irrelevant but I am going to have to keep it.

Final Thoughts and Grade: First of all thank you again for the review, you did a great job and I can understand your reasoning and now you know mine! I am going to add a matchup chapter just trying to find the right way and good information.

+Rep from me and I hope you understand why I have these things

Hi Hi~! I'm here for your requested review. Kinda late but better late then never xD


Appearance - The drops of blood are kinda weird but the guide graphics are still very good. The BB Coding is also very good. Good job.

Cheat Sheet - I think you could reorganize your Cheat Sheet in a better way. It's alright as it is but it can be better.

Viability - I'm not a big fan of Jungle Tryndamere but I guess he could work in certain team comps. Top Lane Tryndamere is alright.

Tidiness - No complaints.

Spelling Mistakes - I checked half of the guide and I found no spelling mistakes. Good job.

Content - So the content is alright but there's one thing that bothers me. The guide contains a lots of irrelevant information (for example Zones, Don't just sit top, etc). I say this a lot in most of my reviews but a champion guide should stick to teaching the readers how to play the champion. It shouldn't be teaching them how to play the game. But yeah if we ignore the fact that some of the content is irrelevant to the guide the content is pretty good.


Final Thoughts and Grade:
Well you asked me what I would like to see more so I'm gonna answer that for ya. I would like to see a Match-Ups chapter. That's pretty much it. Like I said some things should be removed (at least in my opinion). Overall a very nice guide.

+1 from me a grade of 8.

-cyberskull

thanks for good guide :D

This is a nice guide, and i enjoyed that you added videos, i also like the images, they add a lot of creativity to the build.

~Gj 1+

Thanks Man, I heard that somewhere before don't really remember where, and don't worry to much about troll votes if you stick around long enough you will see a million of them lol, but the good guides will almost always make there way to the top ♥

Even then there's nothing we can do about it. The great thing about Mobafire is that guides are created by the public for the public. Even though that gives power to the trolls, it's the way the system works. So anyone, and I mean anyone even an 84 Amish woman who has never played a videogame in her life could make an account and log in just to give her two cents. Granted that most likely would never happen but it could :P

^ You... I like you :) Thanks for the vote. Also I like the way you said that.


Well said

Very well written, even though votes like that aren't against the rules, I up vote good guides and yours is really good so even though you get troll votes just remember if you got haters it most likely means your doing something right :P

also it may be a little early to vote on the build portion of your guide since pre season just started but it's on it's way to being great :)

^ But its doing nothing. He states his guide is better but he recently created it. You sure there is nothing anyone can do? The guy literally made his account yesterday and created 2 guides with no content and states that his guide is better?

No matter how hated they are, votes like that are allowed.