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Master Yi- Nobody can bring you peace but yourself.
Build Guide By IPodPulse
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Master Yi Guide
Master Yi- Nobody can bring you peace but yourself.
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Things you should add
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Something I decided to mention but does not have a place in the classic review format:
My rating: --
Read my special notes.
Please PM me if you have any questions or comments regarding my review - I might not read it if you post it in the comments ^^
Thansk for your comment :). I will fix thosen right away, The spacing didn't seem to work I added 2 spaces but i didnt seem to do anything so I will try 3 or more. I will change the build name to "Top" and I willl look for spelling mistakes and other problems.
Don't mention it lol "Thansk", oh at least it has its charms :D
Pros:
+1 Well made, detailed
+1 Good Editting
+1 Excellent Text Spacing
+1 Nearly perfect use of imagery
+1 Mostly good chapter names[/color]
Cons:
-1 Coding: really does help when font is modified for emphasis, etc. ; jhoijhoi is a mobafire user who made a guide that describes how to do some coding, you can google this.
-1 Image spacing: ever time there is image next to text or vice versa, you need 2-3 spaces in between for it to look aesthetic. This would make your item chapter infinitely better.
-1 Build role/lane should be specified in build section, also the name of your build at the moment is "Build 1", a good place to specify the role no?
Side notes:
If you bring up
Some typos here and there (In "Conclusion" you start with the word "Soo" which does not exist in most worlds :3)
Not too sure about "Introductions" chapter, not gonna lie but I didn't like it/didn't want to read it (but I did... sigh).
Same goes for adding a link to your other guide just for publicity.... if people like your build and they know mobafire well enough they will click your name to find your other guides.
"Just like what I said in my Tryndamere guide" - Never QUOTE yourself from another guide! Will anyone care about what you said in a
This may be preference based but for your last chapter to be called "Conclusion" is just a little not serious enough for my taste, from the name itself to the content (with exception of Visitor's image, I liked that - like my sig). If you want to, say thanks to those you feel you owe it to, heck its like your signature (ergo why intro is pointless). This is pretty much where you can thank people and ask for what you would like us the readers to do. You can even ask for donations if that is what you think you deserve but to start a sentence with "So that is my guide" is a mistake in English as well as in Guide writing. In fact it is probably best to never refer to yourself except in the third person like "brought to you by IpodPulse".
Anyways good job and best of luck to your guide's development,
Deady
PS. What are the Side Notes for? Lest just say those are the things I look at when choosing whether to even bother checking out your other builds, whether they have already been published or not :)
Thansk for your comment :). I will fix thosen right away, The spacing didn't seem to work I added 2 spaces but i didnt seem to do anything so I will try 3 or more. I will change the build name to "Top" and I willl look for spelling mistakes and other problems.
it actually looks ok but an example item build without any defense sucks
Question have you read the guide or did you just skim through it? Well either way you should know that this Yi build is an Assassin build. Generally for assassins you dont want to build defense otherwise you would change from assassin to a fighter. I ask you to reconsider your vote and perhaps tell me what I did good and what I did wrong just like what @deadicated did.
Just to counter Kaggboer2012.
Actualy the guide is ok, but I don't play master yi that much and don't know if it's optimal :D Anyway the downvoter doesn't know about alpha strike and meditation
omg u countered me hard there. but yi still needs defense.
Actualy the guide is ok, but I don't play master yi that much and don't know if it's optimal :D Anyway the downvoter doesn't know about alpha strike and meditation
+1 Well made, detailed
+1 Good Editting
+1 Excellent Text Spacing
+1 Nearly perfect use of imagery
+1 Mostly good chapter names[/color]
Cons:
-1 Coding: really does help when font is modified for emphasis, etc. ; jhoijhoi is a mobafire user who made a guide that describes how to do some coding, you can google this.
-1 Image spacing: ever time there is image next to text or vice versa, you need 2-3 spaces in between for it to look aesthetic. This would make your item chapter infinitely better.
-1 Build role/lane should be specified in build section, also the name of your build at the moment is "Build 1", a good place to specify the role no?
Side notes:
If you bring up
Some typos here and there (In "Conclusion" you start with the word "Soo" which does not exist in most worlds :3)
Not too sure about "Introductions" chapter, not gonna lie but I didn't like it/didn't want to read it (but I did... sigh).
Same goes for adding a link to your other guide just for publicity.... if people like your build and they know mobafire well enough they will click your name to find your other guides.
"Just like what I said in my Tryndamere guide" - Never QUOTE yourself from another guide! Will anyone care about what you said in a
This may be preference based but for your last chapter to be called "Conclusion" is just a little not serious enough for my taste, from the name itself to the content (with exception of Visitor's image, I liked that - like my sig). If you want to, say thanks to those you feel you owe it to, heck its like your signature (ergo why intro is pointless). This is pretty much where you can thank people and ask for what you would like us the readers to do. You can even ask for donations if that is what you think you deserve but to start a sentence with "So that is my guide" is a mistake in English as well as in Guide writing. In fact it is probably best to never refer to yourself except in the third person like "brought to you by IpodPulse".
Anyways good job and best of luck to your guide's development,
Deady
PS. What are the Side Notes for? Lest just say those are the things I look at when choosing whether to even bother checking out your other builds, whether they have already been published or not :)