Also, Could you inbox me? I'd love to have a massive discussion without having to spam the guide :D

Yeah, There are some flaws cheers.
Just a couple things
I don't know how to put a video on a guide.. first time nub here xd..
Uhh thanks for the advice anyway man (:

Thanks for the shoutout, though if you are going to use information so close to the original author's I'd let them know before publishing ;)

Now for a few notes so that you can make your guide look as good as possible and increase its accuracy:

• I'm about to publish my own build for against AD so I won't give it away quite yet, but there are a couple flaws that you might want to rethink if you really take a look at your purchase order
• If you add enchantments to the "and remember" section it will show your full build on the search page
• Pros and Cons are usually placed higher up in the guide. Also you need to /list at the end of your pro's section and start another one so as to avoid the double indentation
• In the Pros and Cons section you state that Command: Attack provides CC but the only way it would do that is if you had a Rylai's Crystal Scepter in your build, which you do not so this is technically incorrect.
• In the cons section you have BB coding for the wraiths but it is referencing the wraiths on the 3's map so this is incorrect
• Really the Armor runes are only required against an AD mid or when there is a fighter jungling but to each his own
• In the masteries section you state "The magic resist is so important I can't even explain" however there is no magic resistance supplied by the masteries you have chosen; perhaps you meant if you had gone 21/9/0 instead of 21/0/9?
• I seem to remember reading that Clarity will not be available on Summoner's Rift once S4 starts and if that is the case then it should be removed from your "spells" section
• Perhaps you can link to a video of xPeke pulling off a good Teleport gank to further emphasize your point
• Jungle combination has actually changed, though I have been lazy and haven't updated it in my guide, it is on my list since I am going through and updating all of my old videos; I wouldn't suggest showing that order if you'd like to be accurate.
• BB coding doesn't work for the "Notes" on the cheat sheet so take off all of the brackets so that it doesn't look awkward

All in all I'm glad that I inspired you to write your own guide and I hope that the notes I've left here help you in making it better :)

Have fun editing and I'll check back in in a bit.