Well, it's true that some things are missing in this guide, but it's still pleasent to read. I enjoyed the videos showing the combos.

As said before, you sure can improve this guide. You should take a look at some others guides and see what's missing in your.

Beyond that, really good for a first try.

Thanks a lot for your feedback,its my first guide and I tried to do my best.You are right in all the things you said.Ill work on it! Thanks!

It's an OK start.

You should take follow points into account though

• Turn on C2V (edit - right hand top corner (force comments))
• Elaborate on the chosen runes
• Explain the possible empowered abilities in you ability section
• Add a Summoner Spells section
• Add a Masteries section
• Try to reorganize your chapters, it's a bit of a chaos
• Try to reorganize everything in columns
• Take Recovery if you go full glass cannon instead of Enchanted Armor
• Maybe add some defensive options? You can't go full AD every single game

You're off on a good start, but there's still a ton of work ahead to make it more readable.

Try to read this (and implement it)

Best of luck,

Foxy