The guide looks very clean for your first try. However, I would've change some of the guide info.

As a begineer, I would have hard time finding info when to buy something or when to put one of your runes. Honestly, just add some info in it. For example, on the RECOMMENDED BACKS FOR ON-HIT (CONQUEROR) i dont know why would you add Recurve Bow and Aegis without putting info when to buy it. It negates the whole guide with just one single mistake. Its not that bad, but some begineers could have trouble with it.

The other thing is that I would change the text in some of the guide. For example the "Viable On-Hit Items" seems like these items are particulary on-hit items. And you added deaths dance and sterak in there. Someone could get misinformated from the guide.

The third, probably the longest thing to do here is to create a new tab and add "Crit-Yi" there. Putting 2 playstyles in the same tab makes it a lot longer to read and it looks kinda ugly. Its just a visual preference, do what you want.

Overall, its your guide and I honestly liked it! I hope you will change it to be more begineer-friendly and I think the guide would reach even more views than it has now. Good luck.

Hey there!

I see this is your first guide, well, great job man! Even if it's only a WIP you had the will to start a guide AND research about BBCode, you'll see how you'll grow here on MOBAFire if you keep going.

Now about the guide, I'll try to review considering it's WIP state.
I'd not recommend putting all items in a single row, instead you could split them into smaller fragments like Second back, Boots, Damage items, etc. as it would appear a lot less like a "fixed" build. Also, you could mention that Eyeball Collection is relative to the amount of eyeballs collected, instead of a fixed value.

Anyway, great job, I'll keep my eye on this guide for future updates. See ya!