First of all, I didn't realize it was the same thing in French, so apologies for that xD

If you look at your builds, NONE of them are full.

I don't get what you mean by my reasoning is flawed when I say heal is bad.

Heal is bad.

The reason being, it doesn't help at all late game, there are much better spells to get, ESPECIALLY on an offensive character like Kog.

As for reading your guide, I did look through it, and it makes no sense. Please read through it again...there are spelling and grammar errors throughout, and I would not refer to it as a guide at all;

in the 2nd build all you mention is that you should sit there and auto attack, and the spell vamp + heal will keep you up. That is such ridiculous ideology: you don't just stand and attack, you will get focused and die instantly due to no defenses; lackluster heal and spell vamp will not help against that.

What is funny about your first build is you get AD (which isn't even useful on Kog.....) yet you focus in the build on using your ultimate and ooze, which don't even scale off AD..........

Kog is a caster, you build him with attack speed and AP to shred enemies with your ult and W. no other way. AD doesn't even make sense, plain and simple.

And no, that is not what the comments are for.

The comments are for guide users to ask questions/comment on the build.

The writer of a guide should KNOW about the champion they are writing about, hence it being a GUIDE for inexperienced players for that champ...if anyone is writing a GUIDE for ANYTHING, THEY should not be asking for HELP on what they are WRITING ON. EVER. POINT CLOSED.

That is like Obama asking how to be President.

That is like Matt asking how to make a website.

In summation:

1. Your builds are not complete.

2. Heal is bad.

3. AD is bad on Kog.

4. You have no good guide descriptions.

5. You don't seem to be very informed on the champion you are writing a guide on if you need help on him.

I should 100% downvote this, but I try to let the guide author make changes before I downvote.

SO, I am giving you some time to edit your descriptions, finish your builds, and learn more about Kog, and I will come back.

If you haven't done anything you can be assured I will -1, if you have I will reconsider.

And feel free to ask me any questions if you need help on anything.

you can also PM Mowen, she is very knowledgeable with Kog'Maw.

English contents have been simply translated in french.
Yes,Build 1 is in complete :p check the 2 Others thought.
About not being great,I demand a precision on what is not great:
The itemization,skill order,masteries,runes or simply the edition of this guide?
English content have only been translated in french (Dont see why this is a problem?)
If Asking for help after writing a guide doesn't make sense to you,
then tell me what are comments made for? lol.
And here I thought comments were made in order to discuss the build...

And with your permission,I'd like to ask you if you did read the full content of this guide,or just watch itemization? I have expressed justifications on how I think this would help.THis is not about itemization only,gameplay affects these choices drastically.

PS:you just said heal was bad,as you can see this helps in editing this guide.So your reasoning is flawed due to your actions.

Not voting, but this isn't really great.

1. Your builds aren't full, you only include a few items and don't ever finish off the builds in the guide.

2. Half of your guide is in French.

3. Heal is bad.

4. It seems you don't know much about Kog'Maw if you are asking for help on how to cast with him IN the guide. WHY ON EARTH would someone want to use a GUIDE on how to PLAY a champion if the AUTHOR is ASKING how to play him IN THE GUIDE?

:)

Build 1 is a bit complicated and needs some suggestions.
Build 2 is a lot more comprehensive and should help you learn Kog'Maw easyly :)
Also,this will continously be updated.One thing for sure that makes me doubt is either get Banshee's Veil or Manamune? (in order to solve mana problems)
Also,it requires that you post a comment in order to vote.I guess this should evade troll votes =)

Ce guide a été traduit en français.
Guide FR francais français Kog Maw avancé bon bien utilisé

The 3rd build is experimental but it worked just fine with me the last I played it.Comment on it,about ITEMIZATION ORDER.