im confused, do you not replace dorans shield in your build. other than that solid build, it is the same as mine, except i replace dorans with a will of the ancients. looks like you threw this together pretty quickly. Basically, no build(list of 6 items) would be original anymore, people look at these to see strategies and play style, you dont go into to much depth in these things. you also need pictures! no +1 or -1, just spend more time on this and keep improving