Yes i agree with Keels, You should try to add some more photos and other stuff to make the guide more interesting, and include more chapters in the build, however the itembuild is pretty good and I had a good score when i tried it. I ask you to check this guide out Making a Guide by JhoiJhoi It really helped me a lot when i was making my Shaco guide and I think more people is going to like it if you remake it a bit.
But still +1!

Thx im upptading it all the time for better looking and so on but thx for the comment

I think the build itself is pretty good, but maybe using something like photobucket to upload custom pictures goes a really long way to making your guide visually appealing and informative. Look up on the forums to find directions to get you on your way. Good luck.