Sterak's Gage.

Which defensive item do you buy against Talon?

Under your notes for boots at the top it says to take ionian if you take the youmuu's route, and another not says to get youmuu's if you chose static shiv. Along with essence reaver that would add up to 50% cdr which isnt possible...

I laughed at the Tyrone Deschaun part, anyway onto the critique!
I disagree with 2 of the supports you said are "decent", Janna and Karma who I both think are just perfect for Lucian, which I know because Lucian has been my main and I've done a lot of research on him and what runes fit him (and other adc's overall).
1 AD quint 2 AS quints are in fact better as of these latest patches, but it comes at a certain price for another type of rune, the AS glyph. Now, it's not just because it's more comfortable with 2 AS quints + 4 AS glyphs because of the raw speed of your autoattacks(I do have to say it's a really smexy speed with 12% AS speed extra) but it's also because it deals a lot more damage in terms of auto attack trades and csing while dealing with constant pressure from the enemy botlaners (this point can be dismissed because it requires people to deal with having only 5 mr glyphs instead of 9 which is pretty huge in terms of efficent hp against magic damage and with that being more on the alert and trying to stay alive more than being manly and going into people, which is kind of a ***** playstyle, but "you gotta love that *****!").

Anyway, I just feel like you should update the seals with 5x health seals and 4x armor seals, just because it gives so much more stats than just pure armor(it has been calculated through math, einstein approves 'dis point I'm stating).

Edited it, its fixed now

LEWSER

You cannot put six points in your E, put another point into Q for maxing it at level nine.
You should clarify that rushing Infinity Edge is essential.
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