Quick apology for my late reply, school and other stuff is always demanding right? ;)

Of course I appreciate all of your advice and input on how I could have improved my guide. :D

In addition I'm happy that my information helped you out "Newbjoe" with your Darius gameplay! :)

[As it's said in my player info, feel free to add me for in game playing or help]

Couple things: Utilize the bbc code that this site give you. It'll make it a bit more enjoyable. Also, use this page to help you with a little more advanced coding. It'll definitely make your guide more attractive:

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506#chapter3

Finally, make sure you enable force-voting. It'll help with getting people who vote down to give you some constructive criticism.

I kinda am still new to the game but like ive got darius and other top champs. he is really easy to play but ive been looking at guides at this scite. but yea like what the guy said, its good info man, just no picz or colors. it helped though cuzz i wasnt sure about phage OR that upgrade for it until later in the game cuzz i rushed it sometimes but was squishy and slow.

The text is very whitey.

Structure is pretty good, just add some coding and stuff to make it more pretty.

The item section is a bit short, I would explain every item more in detail.

Though your chapter Summoner spells/runes/masteries is structured very well, I still would change them to 3 seperate chapters.

Your guide is actually not that bad, just short and a bit boring to read :P

Good luck ser!
-Meiyjhe