The reason this guide is rated so long is because you have no armor pen and nothing to help you if they get passed the tank. If you would improve on that this would be a better build/guide.

Can You help me make Better build ? :)

Thanks for help in build m8 :) Its my first

4first items , boots ,black cleaver , phantom , infinity and you are unkillable :)

and what if they get passed the tank? this ain't an mmorpg where the tank just taunts someone back if they don't go for him. Also more and more teams are not using a tank at all.

This build is also extremely expensive, landing at about 17.5 k gold. You will never reach that in any game that isn't 60+ minutes long, and even then it will be hard.

Ok, but you can get armor pen in Black Cleaver or Last whisper ,(Madred's) ! :)
Tank = Survivability , I think Twitch is Carry
Thanks for opinion :)

0 survivability, aswell as 0 armor pen (if you destroy someone in two shots you won't even stack tbc). You will be destroyed by even a little poke, sorry but I can't see this working in any way.

Yes, youre right, but if Wrong Team do not buy Armor, this damage defeat them in 2-3hits :),
Vs tanks is really hard so you can buy Madred (Black cleaver reduces armor :) )

Hey mate, You really need to expand a bit. At the moment i can see your stacking pure damage, with nearly 0 defenses, but at the same time you have 0 Armor Pen, As soon as anyone stacks armor your damage will be negated. Remember 100 Armor = 50% damage or there abouts.

This is my first Build
Please do not being too raw