Thank you, I appreciate the input. I am adding some of these sections and changes as suggested. I now take a look at some varying summoner spell options for jungle Talon. Though I recommend you definitely get at least a leash on blue if you are going to take this route.

While ignite-smite Talon does not have much to work with other than E and R for escaping he is a less dependent jungler and has a good finisher.

Warding is added and being worked on.

The situational item builds will take some time and practice as well as the section on ganking, however I hope to get some helpful videos in here as well.

Like chuby said, but one more thing. You shold honestly need flash or ghoust to get out of sticky situations. Your ulti is not enough.

Could use some more work. As A Chubby Baby said, I would like to see more chapters in your guide. I would really like to see warding segment here, along with more information about ganking and techniques. As for your actual jungle portion of your guide... it needs work. This is supposed to be a jungle guide, so there should be a lot more detail there, such as a better explanation on what you do with your abilities, and give us a better understanding and view on your route!

Good Luck!

IMO, i just dont like jungle talon. however other than that, you should improve your guide overall. some extra coding and more chapters? you should explain other situational items and not just the ones you use in your purchase order. for your jungle route thing, maybe a map of LoL? to help on your coding, check out jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide. for your summoner spells, explain other choices.

keep up the good work~