Honestly i think the bloodthirsters would make more sense to get first, it adds a lot of damage, considering talon is an amazing creeper he can keep it charged up all the time, and the warmogs is there for the durability and to doscourage the other team from trying to pick a fight with you in the teamfights. and just because he is an assassin doesnt mean he can't carry a game. I mean look at nocturne for instance he's also an assassin but he's able to carry a game as well as tryndamere or master yi. talons just the kind of champ that can take control pick up quick kills get out and carry a game.

i dont really think u need frozen mallet AND warmog's armor..... and i think you get the blood thirster way to early.

Why do you even exist. You build 2k bonus health and don't have Atma's Impaler.
Talon is an assassin, and you built him carry.

I love playing the AD carry. Or hell, the carry in general. Talon's not one I've tried, but I have to say, overall good coverage of a new champion that I have yet to pick up and learn.
Solid build. Not as generic as the typical AD carry set up. Good show.

This a pretty nice build for your first build, but it's something that deff needs some more substance in it. (Experiences as talon/ a bit more explanation in some areas) Other than that you've done a nice job, bro.

Hey I like the Idea of the build, but I think it needs some color, kind of hard to read just plain text. :)

The only part I don't like is where you say Trinity Force is a Taboo for Talon, that item is great for just about any character.