For example, I would explain what being an AD carry means, what you do as an AD carry, where you should be positioned, what your job in teamfights is. For laning phase something like the important of last hitting, map awareness, knowing when to zone. Stuff like that.

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I think I have corrected the grammatical errors that you mentioned, I will look for more of them after a couple of days, and DoomGlad, please give some examples about things you would want to see in the teamfights or laning phase section.

and a couple others.

BBCoding looks good but could use some more detail in teamfights and laning phase.

Alright, since you fixed that. I also noticed a few things;

• 3x Greater Quintessence of Life Steal is not favorable. Take 2 of them and 1x[[Greater Quintessence of Attack Damage.
• In your Cons section, you said:
  Herkkuparila wrote:

  - Ardent Blaze
  
  Did you forget to complete it?
• You also have a few grammar errors every here and there. Have someone proof read the guide for you.

Haha :D thanks for noticing, It was meant to be where cleanse is now, and cleanse was supposed to be with the other spells

You put Barrier in your cheat sheet, but in the summoner spells section you didn't include it meaning that we should never take it?