Thanks for the advice!

About the notes, I didn't want to put all that information in the there. It's just that it seemed better to put it there so people could make sense of the items rather then scrolling down to figure it out. If anyone happens to know how I could actually put the information in a chapter close to the items section, could you comment and let me know? :D

But yeah, I will be looking to improve the guide when I have more time. I will also be improving it more and more as I gain more experience as a wukong player and jungler. Thanks again, Ravenholm.

theres a few major killing points to this guide.

1. don't put item explanations in the notes. nothing should be explained in the notes. a note is well... just a note. a small quick fact you should glance over. explain items, skills, EVERYTHING, etc in the body of your guide.

2. theres no graphics. its key to include graphics to present your information in a capturing way that clearly defines importance of your ideas. which leads me into my next point

3. the presentation and word choice is pretty poor overall. the redundancy of your flow between ideas is somewhat painful and definitely annoying to read. if you cannot come up with better control over your paragraph/idea control you should use bbcoded graphics for flow control and place your ideas next to them.

4. and to put the nail in the coffin, theres a lot of bad jungle information here. i suggest either explaining the champion in depth and leaving the jungle metagame to another guide, (there are plenty out there. a harmless link wouldn't hurt.) a lot of the jungle information is well... pretty wrong. it might work in bronze or silver but as you begin to climb you will realize how wrong you are now. it happens to everyone you shouldn't feel bad about it.

this is something i almost feel obligated to downvote but of course i always give the author some time to respond to constructive criticism. good luck.

Still doesn't huh? I thought I fixed that. But yeah, my item build, the whole build in general, is to kill and not tank. Playing extremely aggressive and catching anyone alone will win games. So I tend to build majority damage and only defensive when it gets to late game and both sides are going back and forth. Even so, Banshee's Veil is a great item and I'd recommend for really bursty AP champs like LB and Gragas. But I don't think it's necessary.

Your cheat doesn't show Quintessences and you should build more defensive items like Banshee's Veil + Randuin's Omen + ... and then two/three offensive items with boots.