looks much better now. good job!

thanks for the tip mastajdog i'm working on i right now

but.... if you hit r having finished this build, it will put you at theoritical 3.9 attack speed... a bit wasted.... please revise accordingly... there's a 3.5 cap... good job though.

good job. just wondering.... why do you wait so long for nashor's?

thank you I have thought about it and have made certain changes but am still working on it

You've got way more than 6 items there dude. Add some strategy on how to actually play Yi and such. Also, if you're going for survivability, get a frozen mallet instead of Rylai's, since Rylai's only procs on spells. Your masteries aren't really that great. You have extra damage to minions, but not armor penetration, and 3 points in "improved death" is nowhere near as good as the regeneration one, also, Greed only ends up giving you 180 gold in 30 minutes, and is pretty bad for a mastery in general, but especially so for someone who's good at farming.

Please be kind this is my first guide any comments and or changes that you think i should make will be much appreciated