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- Nice style
- Great composition
- Efficient lighting but lacks focus
- Good use of c4d's
- Text spoils it though
- Amazing smudge/blur and lighting
- Good composition
- Text slightly spoils it as it slightly grabs too much focus
- Top right? >:D
- Lack of focus
- Too much lighting
- Don't get the line going through
- Text isn't appealing
- Background is nice
- I'll avoid using too much blur though.
- Nice work, like the focus, composition and c4ds use
- Could possibly blend the c4d's better through color balance
- Text again is ruining it ;(
- Over sharpened
- Focus is decent
- C4D needs to be blended better though :D
- Text is nice
- Nice use of brushes
- good composition
- Good color scheme
- Text is nicely placed, i would change color to slightly more cyan~green like sorakas hair
- Focus is decent too
- Text is nice, but grabs too much focus, ill lower drop shadow for this
- Background is good not too sure about the left
- I would recommend centering cho
- Looks slightly over sharpened on his jaw
- Nice focus and lighting
- Text is efficnet but not sure about where you've placed the text
- Looks slightly oversharpened
- I love this one
- Text is amazing, like the best i've seen in any signature
- Background is nicely executed
- Composition is good too
- Just looks slightly over sharpened on some areas. Or just bad render? ;/
- Very light
- Good text and liking border
- Lacks focus however
- Everything is good
- Looks over sharpened though
- Lighting could be better though, to help the focus
- Good composition and focus
- Decent lighting
- Text is good, like the font choice very well executed
- Background looks good
- Font slightly grabbing focus
- Good signature >:D
- Don't know about this
- Amazing background and composition
- colors for font is good
- Looks appealing
- not sure why main character is greyscaled though, looks odd.
- Nice signature overall
- could improve focus though, seems theres an overload of lighting.
- I see where you're going with this
- c4ds could be better executed however
- font could be improved
- Looks slightly plain , not sure how to express this one though.
Overall,
Your signatures are good, I think you're struggling with your text though, although some of your signatures have shown good text format and style, also ill suggest working better with your focus which is something that most your signatures are lacking, so try to use less sharpen, slightly improve blur, and also try lighting effects in filter or a soft pixel brush , both at lower opacity if necessary to help fianlize a good focal point for your signature. Hopefully this should make your signatures awesome!
Also,
Welcome to MOBAFire, Good to have another artist on board, check next SOTW and enter! >:D
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Wow Xiaowiriamu thank you so much for your time!
And I know that what you're saying is good cause you really had bad comments about the signatures that I know are bad. Most of them are requests from people who I don't give a **** about and were done in 20 minutes.
However, you had good critics on the signatures for people who I give a damn about :)
I am indeed improving the text aspect of my signatures and I look forward to having more tips from you and the community. I will also slack off the sharpening a bit :P
P.S. All the signatures from one piece are in fact Banners so the text has to stand out more because what it says IS the important part.
-The main character is grayish cause I wanted to make it look like the other characters (who are artists) had drawn him on the wall and the work is still unfinished.
Anyway, thanks again for such a precise review of my work :)
And I know that what you're saying is good cause you really had bad comments about the signatures that I know are bad. Most of them are requests from people who I don't give a **** about and were done in 20 minutes.
However, you had good critics on the signatures for people who I give a damn about :)
I am indeed improving the text aspect of my signatures and I look forward to having more tips from you and the community. I will also slack off the sharpening a bit :P
P.S. All the signatures from one piece are in fact Banners so the text has to stand out more because what it says IS the important part.
-The main character is grayish cause I wanted to make it look like the other characters (who are artists) had drawn him on the wall and the work is still unfinished.
Anyway, thanks again for such a precise review of my work :)
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I've been making a few signatures for my clan : Meridian Gaming on league of legends and I also have leftovers from my clan on another game I stopped playing...
here they are !
Hope you liked them :) Feel free to give comments on any of them