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Creator: utopus August 22, 2014 4:30pm
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ELO: Silver 2
Champion: Caitlyn
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-guide-to-headshooting-as-caitlyn-version-2-1-391669
Special requests: Do you think I should add a matchups section or is the cheatsheet enough? Other than that point out any error you find :)
Spellcheck: Yes, please.
Score: Yes, please.

Thanks in advance!
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I'm just about done with the review - just trying to draw a couple pictures. i'll see if i can return this to you tomorrow
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Thanks a lot for the sig, jhoi! :)
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Finished with Trolling's Caitlyn guide review =) If anyone else needs guides critiqued, LAY IT ON ME!
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Thanks a lot for the sig, jhoi! :)
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It's a bit ankward but I just published my Lucian guide :D Would you accept to review it as well?

If yes, here are the information:

Champion: Lucian
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/comprehensive-guide-stomping-solo-queue-with-the-purifier-399790
Special sections: The gameplay section is nowhere near as detailed as the one in my caitlyn guide. Should I elaborate more on it and if yes, what should I focus on?
Spellcheck: Yes
Score: If you want :)
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Finished the review; I'll scan your review and post it on your guide at the end of the day today :)

EDIT: Review has been posted; I'm available for more reviews!
EDIT^2: @Mod could you please retitle this thread to, "My scout review service: I will critique your guide :)"? Thanks
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Thanks a lot for the sig, jhoi! :)
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Thanks to Ubnoxius for the sig!
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ELO: Platinum
Champion:Nasus
Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/siphoning-more-souls-for-the-pyre-in-depth-nasus-guide-404913
Special Requests: None
Guide has been spellchecked for Grammar & Spelling: Yes
(optional) Would you like me to give your guide a score: Certainly
Sig by TheNameless ^ Check out my Nasus guide ^
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Hey all, sorry for taking so long to get to these - I got locked out of my account and only now was just able to log back into it. I'll get to reviewing these tomorrow :)
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Thanks for the sig, MissMaw!
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ELO: Plat 1
Champion: Lee Sin
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lee-singa-jungle-preseason-5-my-way-patch-4-21-406876
Special Requests: I'm not sure how to get the correct size for my image that comes before all the chapters per se. Thanks in advance!
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ELO: Silver II
Champion: Vladimir
Link: Needs buffs, please Riot.
Special Requests: Readability and completeness.
Guide has been spellchecked for Grammar & Spelling: Y

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