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Creator: BigBoxGamer March 22, 2015 11:37pm
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As far as I know, I'm doing just as good as him. I need someone to go over my replays, because the worst critic anyone can have of themselves is themselves. Most pros won't even see what they're doing wrong, because you can't see your own faults. Only someone else can.
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Vayne
0787262D89CDC1DB4A1DCE069E954F31

Kalista
1FCFA4D0F58DC3965D76F6D7C7F1C362


Here's my analyses on the games you've played.
I'll be documenting everything through time stamps
Vayne
0:00 - You've got a ****ty lane ahead of you. Cait Alistar vs Vayne Annie won't have kill pressure until level 6, at the earliest. Not sure if you know that, but it's good to evaluate your lane matchup and adapt your playstyle accordingly before you head into lane.
2:23 You needed to be with your annie, zoning cait. It's her fault for being so far forward, but it's also your fault for being so far back.
2:30 You could've punished cait so hard by now if you zoned her more.
2:37 Again, here. Don't overrespect your lane opponents - Most of them probably aren't as brutal as I am with cait when we do caitlyn challenges.
3:38 You shouldn't have spent any time focusing alistar; Caitlyn was in AA range, and there wasn't any reason you shouldn't have immediately focused her.
4:15 gj
5:50 REALLY good job at freezing the wave at your turret. Notice how you aren't last hitting so much as trying to match caitlyn's autoattack pattern
6:47 You're overrespecting your lane opponents again. You and annie can all in cait alistar.
7:45 Again, you shoulda been with annie to zone cait.
8:59 Right now, there was something you should've done, but you did not. What was it?
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9:40 Good decision here; Vi was dead, and there was nothing you could've done to save her without endangering yourself as well. She could've lived if shen and annie had helped with dragon though, so you're not totally off the hook.
9:49 You and zed can 2v3 this if you had gone in right now. Now tell me why.
11:02 You made a mistake right here. You're walking towards bot lane/mid lane, when you should've been walking to mid lane/top lane, and tried to create map pressure on that side of the map. Fiora is a time bomb, and Shen soon won't be able to handle her, so you need to do what you can to keep her down.
11:18 You should've died right here.
12:47 where the HELL are you going? You won't get to bot lane in time to get the CS; You should've stayed mid to get the tower. This was a REALLY bad blunder. You could've taken tower easily from this, which is especially important as vayne, because vayne is TERRIBLE at taking towers. You need to seize every opportunity to take towers.
14:35 You blew your ulti, and you know that they are looking to initiate. Don't make it easy for them.
14:53 someone pointed out the slowpushing wave bot. The INSTANT you see someone headed bot, you should initiate because of the numbers advantage you have. More importantly, you should've told your team this.
15:43 you should've told annie to stay. You could've have a 5v3 fight with shen coming up soon.
16:27 Right now, you should've been running to the dragon with zed. Because you stayed, fiora zoned you out of the fight.
18:12 With annie being bot, your team lost so much map pressure. You should've told annie to help zed mid and help him make a play. Especially when 3 came mid. Personall
21:57 You should've walked towards your teammates here. This would've been a 4-0 instead of a 4-2 here.
26:37 Because you didn't leave for mid right now, you lost mid turret.
26:53 You lost so much map presence by heading back bot here.
31:10 Why didn't you damage the inhib turret right now?
34:18 Right now, you should've pushed bot. Your opponents committed so much to catching zed, youcould've taken an inhib turret + inhib from this. This decision to take jungle right here may have single handedly lost you the game.
39:54 Right now, you should've pinged baron. None of them could've taken it. Yeah that was a really bad call not to take baron. That could've instawon you the game
41:43 Shen's a god.
42:52 Now, you should've told your team to push mid or bot. You **** on them 5v5
44:15 nice.

I want you to do the same thing for the Kalista game, annotating your game with timestamps. I want to see you break down and criticize your own play, now that you have an idea of what I look out for.
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As far as I know, I'm doing just as good as him. I need someone to go over my replays, because the worst critic anyone can have of themselves is themselves. Most pros won't even see what they're doing wrong, because you can't see your own faults. Only someone else can.

I'll go over one of your games either today or tomorrow and analyze it in a video.
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Well I forgot, and when I tried to do it just now, neither of the codes seem to be working. Could you try sending me a code of a more recent game? Preferably ranked.
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Here's one.

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Okay that one worked, I've got it downloaded. I'm going to bed whenever I get tired of watching MSI, so I'll hopefully be able to get it done tomorrow.

This is the kind of analysis you should expect.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=miD6_JOt1ko
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This is just a pure example people that can't play a situation properly. There's three moments in particular that I know of and one was what should have been a 3v1 tower dive. My jungler and support let me go alone for reasons unknown. The second, their support and ADC was out of position and I was the only one to move in to punish that. The third, I went in for what should have been a 2v1 gank on the mid and the jung let me go in alone.

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Why am I so bad this game? I have no chance of ever being good. I don't think at any point during my time playing LoL that I'll ever consider it a game that's fun-to-play. Not while I'm this bad.

P.S: I very confident Cass ult is bugged, I ulted three people right in their face and it missed.

P.S.S: Cassio is a massive comfort pick for me in Mid-lane.

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I ended up leaving this game, I have no time for scrubs. Especially lucky ones like this Vayne.

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