Its not really OP or UP its just wierd. You shuld polish the concept a little more. I definitely know how you see somthing in your head as completely awesome but on paper its lackluster. Try to be more descriptive. Especially on your ult. Does it work every time you click them. Like a passive or is it an actual move. Also there is no scaling on the move. So why waste points on upgrading it.
Your passive should blind for less time as well. 3 seconds is too much for an AOE passive. Try to remake Q. Like you can use it all the time with no suppress, but if you use it from vanish it will do your suppress thing.
Vanish has too long of a time for stealth. You should take it down to like 10/15/20/25/30 seconds with a scaling AD bonus like 10/20/30/40/50% extra magic damage. Maybe make poison blade an active that empowers his next strike to do X amount of damage over Y time. And give it a short CD. Its too like other moves out there the way you currently have it.
Your passive should blind for less time as well. 3 seconds is too much for an AOE passive. Try to remake Q. Like you can use it all the time with no suppress, but if you use it from vanish it will do your suppress thing.
Vanish has too long of a time for stealth. You should take it down to like 10/15/20/25/30 seconds with a scaling AD bonus like 10/20/30/40/50% extra magic damage. Maybe make poison blade an active that empowers his next strike to do X amount of damage over Y time. And give it a short CD. Its too like other moves out there the way you currently have it.
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Its not really OP or UP its just wierd. You shuld polish the concept a little more. I definitely know how you see somthing in your head as completely awesome but on paper its lackluster. Try to be more descriptive. Especially on your ult. Does it work every time you click them. Like a passive or is it an actual move. Also there is no scaling on the move. So why waste points on upgrading it.
Your passive should blind for less time as well. 3 seconds is too much for an AOE passive. Try to remake Q. Like you can use it all the time with no suppress, but if you use it from vanish it will do your suppress thing.
Vanish has too long of a time for stealth. You should take it down to like 10/15/20/25/30 seconds with a scaling AD bonus like 10/20/30/40/50% extra magic damage. Maybe make poison blade an active that empowers his next strike to do X amount of damage over Y time. And give it a short CD. Its too like other moves out there the way you currently have it.
Alright. I tried looking at all the things you mentioned, and basically a lot of the suggestions you came with made a lot of sense, so I decided on just those that you suggested, and rewrote the descriptions on some of the moves.
Would it be possible to get a third opinion on this from anyone else, perhaps? ^^
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Blur - Shadow's Apprentice
Class: Assassin
Passive:
Smoke Bomb: When Blur gets below 25% health, he throws a smoke bomb, that blinds all nearby enemies for 1/1.5/2 seconds.
Cooldown: 50 / 40 / 30 seconds
QWE:
Q:
Flash Assault:
Blur teleports behind an enemy dealing 80/120/160/200/240(+50% of attack damage) physical damage. If used while under the effect of Vanish, stuns the enemy for 1 second.
Range: 400
Cooldown: 14 / 13 / 12 / 11 / 10 seconds
W:
Vanish:
Blur disappears into thin air, becoming stealthed for 10 / 15 / 20 / 25 / 30 seconds. Blur's next attack deals the double of his attack damage. This effect stacks with Flash Assault and Dash Strikes. The stealth ends when Blur enters combat.
Cooldown: 20 seconds
E:
Poisoned Blade:
Blur covers his blade with poison adding a damage over time effect to the enemy champion on his next attack, dealing 60 / 90 / 120 / 150 / 180(+70% of attack damage) physical damage upon impact and 8 / 14 / 21 / 28 / 35(+5% of attack damage) physical damage per second for 3 seconds per stack. An enemy champion can have a maximum of 3 stacks on him at all times.
Cooldown: 6 seconds
Ultimate:
Dash Strikes:
Blur lends the powers of the Shadow, and enters a state, that allows all of his attacks to dash to his target each time he strikes, dealing 1.25 / 1.375 / 1.5 of his attack damage on each hit. Stacks with Flash Assault and Vanish.
Range: 500
Cooldown: 90 seconds
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Alright, I'm figuring this might be quite a bit overpowered.. :D But yeah. I'm not really focusing on the values but more the actual concept. But if you have any suggestions for making it less overpowered, I'd appreciate it :)
I might add comments for when he walks around, taunt and a joke later.
Any constructive critisism is well accepted ^_^
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