Feralis (Tortured Soul of the Void)

[quote=Read][h1]Feralis[/h1] [h4]The Tortured Soul[/h4] [h2][u]Story[/u][/h2] Figaro was a misunderstood artist. Corrupt officials, chemical weapons, and death plagued his family. Incident after incident claimed his mother, father, sister, and brothers. Finally, they came for his wife and young child. Being unable to contain himself any longer, Figaro fought with all his might. But being an artist left him with no combat skills or even strength to claim. They left him alive only in spite. Once his family was eradicated in Zaun, Figaro fled in search for a solitary existence where he could contemplate his failure. When on the road to Demacia, slavers captured him. Seeing him as a fairly worthless slave having no strenth or learned trade skills, they beat him and left him for dead on the side of the road. A kind old man found him, and carried him to his home. When Figaro woke, he was suprised to find that he was not only alive but in the presence of a legend. Leonis was the last great artist before the wars began. Now advanced in age, Leonis somehow seemed to have retained all of his vigor from his former years. Seeing the torture within Figaro's broken soul, Leonis asked him one question: "If...if you could save your family, how far would you go." "I would go into the void and back again," he said passion burning through his veins. Leonis warm eyes turned sharply to him. With a dark smile crossing his face, "That is exactly the answer I was hoping for." Leonis eyes turned jet black and Figaro was no more. Four months passed. A new champion approached the gates. Feralis blew the gates off the hinges. Looking around the building, Feralis spotted a summoner. A dark smile crossed his face. -- Torutured in this life, tortured in the next. Life is pain. [h2][u]Skills[/u][/h2] Q - Pain (CD = 14/12/10/8/6) - Skillshot that deals 40/80/120/160/200 (+.4 AP) to all units in range. - Range (600) - Shreaking noise if hits an enemy W - Graviton (CD = 22/20/17/15/13) - Lays a gravity field down for 4 seconds - Size is 200/250/300/350/400 - Slows 10/15/20/25/30% - Deals DOT of 20/30/45/60/75 (+.3 AP) E - Usurp (CD = 16/14/12.5/11/9) - Dash forward and snatches an enemy bringing him back to his starting position. - On snatch AOE silence of 300 range for (.25/.5/.75/1/1.25) - If no target is hit he remains extended - Ranged (300/450/600/750/900) R - Fatal Attrition - Passive: On team death heal for 100/200/300 (+.5 AP) - Passive: On own death all enemies in range are taunted for .5/1/1.5 - DOT of 100/200/300 true damage for leanth of taunt - Range of 200 Passive: Deathly Acquainted - Time Spent dead is 5/10/15% less (scales at 1/6/13) Any ideas or thoughts. I may screw up and make him OP or UP im not very good with ratios. But I have been sort of thinking of a toon like this. Supposed to be like a kidnapping nuke that just assinates safely out of nowhere. But must be expertly played or will die easily.[/quote]