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Posted a Comment: Nov 24th, 2011
"Some things that could help you...
1.Explain your masteries, why did you go 21/9/0, or if other possible mastery tree sets are possible.
2.Separate out your items and add more pictures/banners, Wall of Text is going to scare off some readers.
3.Also specify what type of build TF is in bold or s"
Commented
Posted a Comment: Nov 24th, 2011
"At #10 Jungling Path, you might want to make it more clear with more punctuation/ pictures. Videos also help with conveying a way to jungle successfully. You should also explain why you take this skill or that skill etc. Overall, just slow down, it looks like you rushed this guide a bit :P."
