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Posted a Comment: May 25th, 2011
"Slight Spoiler
"Here mother let me go get you some more towels" Sanar stated. "No my dear, I am alright." "Are you sure mother? It's really not a bother." "Yes my dear thank you, but it is really alright." The day had come, that Pirta Hearthe would enter t"
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Posted a Comment: May 25th, 2011
"It lives! YES! ......Yeah now I need to get on with some of my stuff."
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Posted a Comment: May 24th, 2011
"Okay just scanning through, and here is an editing mistake.
Every time a different character speaks it starts a new paragraph (I believe don't quote me on this). I'm sure if someone else on mobafire sees it she will come to your aid editing wise.
"Blah blah blah" Charcter 1 said, as "
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Posted a Comment: May 24th, 2011
"Yeah...great now you make me want to start writing, but I have finals. Then I have LOL buddies distracting me...sigh."
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Posted a Comment: May 24th, 2011
"Oh alright thats cool, and you can post chapters for critque and stuff here!"
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Posted a Comment: May 24th, 2011
"I think sabbychu was the only one smart enough to focus me through that game, and killed me atleast.
Then I pissed off Considerth...and he chased me from his base all the way back to mine."
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Posted a Comment: May 23rd, 2011
"Jebus you are correct sir."
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Posted a Comment: May 23rd, 2011
"All are wrong."
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Posted a Comment: May 22nd, 2011
"Nope"
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Posted a Comment: May 22nd, 2011
"Miss and Miss
Come come into my garden.
Where darkness blooms among the thorns.
Though are we in a garden?
Or is tis but a dream?"
