• Ignite and flash is one of your most..
• This is your most standard rune page, you’ll always at most times pick this one
• Because of this you’ll be going glacial together with it’s minimal runes to be able to slow down these matchups and make them less dangerous towards you. (minimal runes = minor runes? Not necessarily a mistake but I’m confused).
• First back: You’ll be going lost chapter first item in most of your builds, this because it gives AP and it restores mana whenever you level up. .

• Some matchups are going to be hard against her though like Yasuo and some might be much easier like LeBlanc. The rest of the sentence feels a bit weird to read, but that might just be me.
• Ahri’s main weakness though, ‘’Though’’ is a bit unnecessary here as there is not really a contradiction with the previous paragraph. The following sentence doesn’t follow smoothly, maybe something like She’s also very vulnerable when her Charm is on cooldown. The next sentence is pretty confusing, so the fact that she’s very vulnerable when Charm is on cd makes it a lot harder to lane because of unexpected ganks that might ruin it for you?

• You can also use this spell against matchups where you need to save it for an annoying matchup.
• This because Ignite completely cuts a lot of healing once casted  applies grievous wounds (which decreases healing by 40%).

• Eyeball: Because of your ability to deal lots of damage you should also be able to stack this up pretty easily unless you’re behind.
• Transcendence: This rune is a really good second?? tree option in your rune page for Ahri as it’s just straight up 10% CDR whenever you hit level 10.
• Magical footwear: ‘’are not able to have enough movementspeed before the 10 minute mark’’. Feels off, what is ‘’enough movement speed’’?, might be better to change it to ‘’have a lack of movement speed before the 10 minute mark’’.
• Ultimate hunter: ‘’However, Ultimate Hunter is what allows you to make plays way more frequently. This doesn’t fit with the previous sentence (this one doesn’t actually contradict the previous one) I’d change it to ‘ Ultimate Hunter allows you to make plays way more frequently’.

• Q: ‘Keep in mind that this is indeed your scouting tool.
• Q: Orb of Deception is also a really the ideal tool to
• Q: Keep in mind that the easiest way to stack your passive is by using Fox-Fire, although it shouldn’t be used to too often.
• W: ‘’Your Charm sets up your Orb of Deception and Fox-Fire and allows you to deal a burst of damage with your other abilities. It feels like you say the same thing twice by first mentioning the abilities and then saying that it deals a lot of damage in combination with ‘’the other abilities’’. You can also change it to : Your Charm allows you to deal a lot of burst damage with your other abilities.
• E: Third paragraph, ‘’lose a lot of burst potential since you aren’t maxing up maxing/levelling up your Fox-Fire like normally.

• This is your most optimal skill path as you’ll be Orb of Deception ??? out of your basic abilities because it deals a ton of damage , and it’s your best poke and wave clear damage tool out of all your abilities.
• The second paragraph just feels whack to read, I’m not sure what the issue is.

• As they will always differ from games to games
• For examples if you’re facing AD

Some of the notes are wayy too long, sometimes extra information is good, but I checked all of them before reading and just wanted to quit reading right away. Keep it concise, only put info in there that is ABSOLUTELY necessary and consider splitting some boxes (I’ll try to give suggestions here and there). I think the main issue is that you are explaining WHY you take certain choices instead of simply saying WHEN to take them. The former takes up a lot of space and makes it a terror to read the notes whereas you can simply put it in the runes section if one wanted to know specifically why to take certain choices.


I’d change the last sentence where you say that ignite cuts healing by a whole lot when casted to ignite cuts healing by 40% when applied/ ignite applies grievous wounds.
In the exhaust description you mention that you can cast it ‘’better and faster melee matchups, unlike ranged matchups where it is almost impossible.’’ This sounds quite strange for a point-and-click spell that instantly applies, but I assume that you say this because the range on the spell is limited. Something like ‘’it is better in melee matchups because they will be in range of the spell, unlike ranged matchups where it is almost impossible to apply (in time)’’ would feel more at place.
The teleport description it starts out good… And then ‘’One example of these matchups is Ryze as he can easily kill you if you’re not careful’’. This confuses me greatly, does this mean that he can kill you, but you not him and you’re taking tp because of that? Why wouldn’t you take a defensive summoner if he can easily kill you?


The glacial augment note is pretty long. Try to be concise and put any additional information in the runes section.


The order of the boxes is a bit confusing., I’d put the ‘’If vs heavy AD/AP’’ before the core build path (and maybe boot choices at well, but I’m not sure about that). I myself prefer a chronological order in a cheatsheet opposed to other ways of ordering items.

At first back: ''That way you can get more sustain in lane and you don’t have to back so early''. This is extremely vague, I think of backing early as backing at lvl 3-4 with next to no gold (in which case you cannot afford chapter anyway). Maybe it’s better to mention that chapters prevents you from running out of mana so you don’t have to base every three seconds. Also, do not mention that it’s a great first item because it builds into Ludens, this is just unnecessary information that lengthens the note.
The core build path is pretty confusing, I’m like, is this THE Ahri build? What I mean is that ''core'' is something you get in all your games and aside from Luden's Tempest and tier 2 boots the items seems= situational.
Boot choices, another long note, you can basically delete everything from start up to ‘’However, if you’re indeed… against AP laners and heavy CC comps.’’ And delete everything after that. (And re-add sorcs).
Early & late options: your control ward description is… enthusiastic… but unnecessary. At refillable potion you fall into the trap of explaining what it does instead of when you should get it.

Then, some more long long notes.
You have no separate boxes for Void Staff, Morellonomicon and Rabadon's Deathcap, they are put together with some example builds (Which greatly increases the length of the notes).
Put them in a separate box as well as the other additional items (many items = many notes). I'd suggest boxes for defensive items, offensive items, glacial augment items and perhaps a box for when you're ahead (looking at Mejai's Soulstealer and Spellbinder.


Here are some good concise notes ^_^. However, the charm max second has a bit of unnecessary information (saying that it’s great to keep up with CC so that you can have more chances of winning teamfights).


Calling Spirit Rush her best escaping and damaging tool in her kit feels a bit ambitious, yes it is her best escaping tool/tool to setup kills but it does not actually do that much damage compared to the rest of her kit, Ahri’s damage is actually spread pretty evenly across her abilities so calling any ability the best damaging tools makes me feel bad for all the other ;p. Also, at the end you mention her two main weaknesses (squishy and single targeting CC weakness), but I feel like Ahri is pretty single target focused overall. What might be worth mentioning (too) is that Ahri definitely is not the most long-ranged of mages


Did you know that you cannot cleanse Nether Grasp? Only Quicksilver Sash can remove suppression, Cleanse cannot (you actually say this right below the example.. oops?). At Exhaust you say (again) that you can cast it better on melee matchups. You also say that it isn’t recommended to take against a matchup with Cleanse. However, there is no way of knowing the summoner of your enemy before you go into game. Even though you expect your enemy to take one summoner doesn't mean they'll take it. To give an example, I played a game of Lissandra yesterday (jk) and my jungle was Elise, I was up against a Twisted Fate who (definitely) should have gone cleanse to deal with the CC but he went Teleport (and got whacked).
I would love to see an example at the Teleport summoner. Also, you mention that Ignite was nerfed, avoid mentioning patch history (unless it is very recent), the Ignite nerf is already a pretty long way back.


Because of the fact that Electrocute is a good rune for you, you ideally want to be looking for a trade everytime it’s off cooldown. The latter is good, but the former is definitely not a good reason. I’m sure there is a better reason that this ^_^. Also, you mention it not being worth in the early game, but trust me, small amounts of damage add up in that phase of the game. If you hit the enemy often enough they’ll be low enough to all-in & kill em.
Small nitpick on ravenous hunter description: it is probably less effective because Orb of Deception is classified as AoE and heals less.
On transcendence: the description is quite long, I feel like it could be a bit more concise. For example, The sentence ‘’there is a pretty big downside to this rune though which is before level 10, it’s not going to do anything for you unlike other choices would do.’’ Could be changed to ‘’There is a pretty big downside to this rune as it doesn’t do anything before level 10 compared to other choices. Or something like that.


At cosmic insight you (again) mention a nerf, again (one that is even further back than the ignite nerf), merely mention that you take cosmic insight for the (Active item!) cdr.
At cheap shot you start out why cheap shot is bad compared to sudden impact (Even explaining what sudden impact does). And at the end you completely turn around saying it’s a must for GA as you can proc it way more often. It might be more beneficial to mention that it is a very good choice for the GA build (as that is what these secondary tree options were about anyway) and (maybe) mention that it is not taken with elec as it will give far less damage compared to SI.
Also at ingenious hunter you say you’ll def need ingenious to slow him down because you will be in lane pretty frequently. I fail to understand why making it hard to imagine when I should take this rune. You do a better job of this at the ultimate hunter description.


At Orb of Deception you mention it should oneshot the casters by landing both hits ‘as long as you’re building AP’. Considering your guide is on AP Ahri I’d leave out the last part as it feels unnecessary.


It can be worth to mention the ‘’lane ward’’ against champions that like to roam.

I am currently not going to in-depth read/review the gameplay section, but from what I can see it is concise & in-depth. You mention many different things but keep the explanations short so that’s really good. My only issue is that there is not a clear division between different aspects of gameplay (Like you go from objectives to target selection to playing from behind/ahead to tips and tricks), maybe you could put that beautiful divider you also put in the combo section between those different sections.
I also do not have much to say about matchups (until you add Lissandra ;p) so I guess I reached the end of the review here.