How does this review work:I'll be going into four 'main' topics: Cheatsheet, Content, Presentation and What can be Improved?. All of these topics alone can turn a great guide into an even better one. Just knowing the ins and outs of your champion alone won't be enough if you're not able to properly convey said information. The end goal is always to make it easier for the readers that come to your guide of course.I'll specify these main categories with purple text within this review, as well as some subcategories which will mostly depend on your guide chapters and for that I'll use the following rating system:

Cheatsheet

>Runes: Exquisite

>Summoner Spells: Adequate

Your notes are too vague. Explain why Ignite is used 99% of the times, why is it such a good spell on her? What can you get out of using this spell?

You state that Cleanse is only against Zoe, why? There are a multitude more champions in midlane that all have annoying CC spells that lock you in place and can kill you outright, so why is Zoe specifically the only most annoying reason? Explaining this seems quite important.

>Items: Adequate

Judging by the starting items, I'd assume that the 1st is for any and all easy matchups whereas the 2nd ( Doran's Blade) is for harder to play matchups. I'm not entirely sure of this though because the notes do not state it clearly.

"If you don't feel confident in early matchup and think you need the HP" works for a lot of matchups, even in easier to play matchups that you should win, this statement could still be true. You say you almost always start Long Sword + Refillable Potion, so which one is the standard, and which one is for when the standard isn't good enough?

Ideally you could explain why Tiamat first should be the go-to. Reason for this is because as a reader I can see that obviously it leads to Profane Hydra as your 1st item, however it's not the only build you have. Statikk Shiv is also a build, so clearly Tiamat isn't *always* the 1st go-to in every situation.

Could explain what Mortal Reminder is good into. It's for anti-heal but there are a lot of sources, when is it actually worth picking this item over LDR and when is it not? A great example is against a team comp of say 3+ champions that all heal a lot. Dr. Mundo - Vladimir - Soraka, there's one. Certain items like Bloodthirster is another.

Maw of Malmortius is a little misleading, it's not against "all forms of AP" - Banshee's Veil does that. Maw is specifically for heavy AP burst, that's what the shield accomplishes, removing AP burst. Think of champions like Syndra, Fizz, Evelynn & LeBlanc - these are all champions that deal AP burst. They don't just deal AP, their entire playstyle is formed around trying to kill you instantly.

The only time I could imagine the Hubris build actually being worth using, is against a team comp consisting of just squishy targets. Targets you can kill rather easily, the moment there's a tank on the enemy team, this build becomes pretty pointless. I would probably explain it this way instead since the build is very lethality/assassin focused.

>Ability Order: Exquisite

Note: If anything, the notes here could be a little more detailed!

>Threats & Synergies: Exquisite

Note: Very good! I like this, but there could be more synergies. There are definitely more than 2 junglers and a Yuumi in the game. 😉

Content

>Table of Contents: Exquisite

>Me: Exquisite

>Pros & Cons: Exquisite

>Runes: Adequate

From your runes I now understand that Celerity + Scorch is really good. However, this makes Gathering Storm and Absolute Focus seem inferior. From the descriptions these spells are better for scaling and trying to play for late game, which is something your notes didn't really give me. If that's the case, I believe it should be explained better. Especially when GS is the perfect rune to scale with and not play for picks.

Here Cut Down is shown as an option, yet it was never explained in the notes or shown anywhere else. This seems like a good rune, it should be explained! As someone that'd potentially want to play Quinn - knowing that Coup de Grace is incredible against squishy targets and Cut Down is incredible against tankier targets you cannot burst is the simplest way to explain the differences in these rune options. :P

>Summoner Spells: Exquisite

Note: Here you finally explain why Ignite is in 99% of games and Cleanse is very situational, this should be in your notes too! You also explain that Cleanse is also good for CC like Leona or Amumu, that isn't just Zoe - so it seems to me like it has more uses than one.

>Items: Adequate

More boots are shown here than ones present in your cheatsheet. Your cheatsheet only has Gunmetal Greaves - yet this section also talks about Swiftmarch, Armored Advance & Chainlaced Crushers. If these boots are useful, they should be talked about more. Ideally in the cheatsheet you could include a part that goes over the options for boots.

LDR doesn't give an insane amount of damage, it gives an insane amount of armor pen. This distinction is very important as LDR is completely useless against targets that aren't tanky.

Again you try to explain Mortal Reminder, just wish there was some more concrete examples. You explain that it's to make champions who lifesteal or sustain cry, so give some examples of such champions that will cry. I'm sure Vladimir, Soraka or Draven would not enjoy you building this item, that's for sure.

Serpent's Fang is not present in your cheatsheet, I believe it should be. It's quite a situational item as you only ever run it against champions that can shield (since it destroys shields, that's all it does), so I'd mention this one more.

Voltaic Cyclosword is indeed a very fancy item, so fancy it's also not present in the cheatsheet. Seems like a very good alternative to Edge of Night though like you mention, I'd probably talk about it more.

On this same note - Kraken Slayer, Dead Man's Plate & Yun Tal Wildarrows are also missing from the cheatsheet.

>Abilities: Exquisite

>Game Phases: Exquisite

>Combos: Exquisite

>Roaming Guide: Exquisite

>How to Play vs Mages: Exquisite

>How to Play vs Assassins: Exquisite

>Thank You: Exquisite

>Change Log: Exquisite

Presentation

> Execution: Adequate

Wonderful. I really adore guides that makes use of code and formatting in this type of style (I use it myself as well so of course I am biased). Every section is so neatly made, it's so fun to read through and nothing feels too confusing to read.

My only problem with the guide is that it feels too short. It ends so abruptly for a lack of a better word. After the basic champion portions of the guide are finished, only a couple gameplay concepts are briefly talked about before the guide ends. I fully believe this guide can be expanded upon greatly, it has so much potential.

>Theme of guide (color scheme): Exquisite

I love the color palette and it's really fitting for the guide. If you ever decide to expand upon the guide further I really urge you to keep this color theme going. Very pretty!

What can be Improved?

Making guides more extensive takes a very long time and a lot of dedication. With that said, I do believe that your main focuses aside from what you've already got going should be placed on:

- Gameplay clips / images to visualize stuff that you're explaining, these go a very long way, you already have some for your combos, but there can be more
- How to Play when you're getting ganked, both by your own & opposing jungler, how does that 1v2 work? Do you have to play differently if you're the one getting ganked? Can you play differently if you're the one getting a gank?
- Vision Control & Warding - You're a midlaner, and a champion that's very agile and roam heavy after all, you can gain or deny vision in a very broad way compared to others
- Wave Management - Midlaners have them as well, these come in the forms of freezing, slow pushing and fast pushing, why are these concepts applied, why are they good and what can you achieve from them?
- Lane Priority - What is this concept and how is it used, as a laner your jungler is at full mercy to you, whoever is able to comfortably push their lane can help their junglers faster whenever they intend to do something
- Gameplay in general! Right now you explained the entire laning phase up until level 6. But what about post-6? What about the Middle game? Late game?
- How do you play Quinn during teamfights? You say she's horrible in 5v5s, you should never teamfight. So then what should you do? Explain! Should you pick off targets? Should you flank? Should you sidelane or do something else? Right now it's shown as a "Con" for her, but it's never explained what else to do instead.
- How do you play Quinn when ahead or behind? Do you have to play differently if you're going 1/8/0 and the opposing midlaner has all the agency over the lane and is winning vs going 10/1/2 and you're completely winning?
- How do you farm under tower? This is always more prevalent into matchups that are more difficult, where you'll see yourself shoved in a lot more often. This could neatly go into the "How to Play vs X" sections.
- How do you play skirmishes? Teamfights are bad for you, but what about 2v2s? Skirmishes break out extremely often during every game and the most classic 2v2 skirmish is very often between the junglers & midlaners. What should you do here? What makes sense to do?
- Positioning. How are you supposed to position yourself? During the lane phase, teamfights, skirmishes, sidelaning or splitting? The purpose of good positioning is to get caught the least and to maximimize opportunities the most, so how?
- How do you play around objectives? Let's say drake or voidgrubs are on the map, your team (or just your jungler) is going for said objective, should you play any differently? Let's say the enemy team is going for it instead and your team is pinging to contest or skirmish, does that change your gameplan at all?
- Matchups! Right now you already use the Threats & Synergies to explain some of these, ideally you could opt to explain these in more detail within the guide itself. Your choice!
- Jungle Tracking - The act of tracking the enemy jungler via different means or information on the map and using it to your advantage, whether to roam, avoid a gank yourself or something else. After all a jungler ganking botlane cannot be at the top side of the map at the same time.

Overall Thoughts

Such a pretty looking guide! Like I stated prior, if you continue to work on expanding some gameplay concepts and making the cheatsheet a bit more tidy, I'm confident this guide can become a solid resource for anyone hoping to pick up the bird in the midlane. It's such a pretty guide it should be longer! I hope this review is of help and I wish you good luck on your journey. :)