Constructive Criticism:

1) :/ As you do not buy Ninja Tabi or specify for dodge chance in the defence tree, I would definitely recommend swapping out those Seals of Evasion for Seals of Armour. Also, Marks of Warding are pretty bad, as an off tank, I'd suggest Marks of Magic Penetration, or Desolation.

2) I have no problem at all with your item build beyond the fact that it is very expensive, and that you may like to purchase Glacial Shroud a little earlier in your purchase order.

3) Expanded Mind > Perseverance

4) Greed > Expanded Mind

5) Your green is a little too fluro :P I tend to use Dark Green, as it is less assaultive to the eyes. Also, it's not entirely necessary to colour the whole list. I know it's a pain to colour just the hyphens, but I find it looks nicer.

6) Can't touch this? :P

7) All masteries have now been iconated. ie: Veteran Scars .

8) Like I detail in my guide about making a guide, add "space" in between your columns.

9) Why would you go Skill Sequence > Items > Skill Assessment? That makes no sense. Should be: Skill Assessment > Skill Sequence > Items.

10) With your Partner section, I'd suggest centring those large champion icons, as it looks pretty lopsided the way it is now.

11) I don't know about you, but I find the large use of those icons an eyesore as it creates weird spacing between the lines of your paragraphs. It's often better to just use Akali as opposed to .

12) I think you should remove the title beginning "Summary" as it just looks weird.

Thank you for the reply, I'm glad my build has helped you improve and yes, I will be updating this guide constantly. =)

very nice guide, i learned quite a few things. Keep up the good work, this is one of the guides i would like to see updated. +1

First of all, thanks for replying, mate!
I dislike Greed because it basically gives you around 200 gold in a long game. But it might just shave some precious seconds from getting a main item, so I consider it viable. Perservation becomes noticable if you go for a Force of Nature, otherwise I agree it's not really good.
I like Armor seals, I've added them in the Optional Runes section. I switch freely between both. Generally, dodge serves a better role late game, while Armor is way more viable early and mid game.
Once again, thanks for the feedback and shared issues with the guide. I'll add an update section to inform viewers of any changes.

This is legit :P Very well written, I have just 2 questions:
1.Why not take one point away from Perseverence and put it into Greed ? Seeing as you don't get much farming, some extra gold seems to be nice.

2.Seeing as you're not taking Evasion or Nimbleness , won't it be better to take Armor or HP/level seals? ^_^

Edit: Yeah, I'm Obviously blind about the last one >.<

Thank you for the positive feedback!

Great build. It was great to read, very colorful, nice positioning on the items.
I like the explainations on everything, everything was good.