Gàrraziëm

[quote=Dzeno]This is my new champion called: [b]Gàrraziëm - El terror sangriento[/b] or [b]Gàrraziëm - The terrore cruenta[/b] He's is fairly unique imo, haven't really seen skills like these accept R maybe. But his passive is unqiue with the (Sacrificial) blood bar. Also W his very cool and a strong burst skill but it requires you to use the other skills to get the most potential out of it. Also his E gets stronger and better the more enemies are grouped and close to each other. very good against ganks when they have 3 or more coming at you at the same moment, laucnh it and see their HP drop like hell if they stay to close to each other, and if they separate the escaping/killing becomes easier for you. His Q makes you more lane persistent later on. when you get a few points in it. however don't use it when you're already near death because it uses a huge amount of your HP. [u][b]The numbers presented here are NOT final and require public feedback for proper balancing.[/b][/u] However please give constructive feedback. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [b][u]Stats:[/u][/b] Health : 3 to 5 out of 10 Attacks : 3 out of 10 Spells : 8 to 9 out of 10 Difficulty : 7 to 8 out of 10 [h5]Health: X (+ X per lvl) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: X HP average Damage: X (+X per lvl) ~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: X dmg low Attack speed: X (+ X% per lvl) ~~~~~> lvl 18: X AS average Range: X (between X and X) ~~~~~> lvl 18: X range 500??? or melee(higher AD)? Armor: X (+X per lvl) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: X Arm Average Magic Resist: 30 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: 30 MR Health regen: X (+X per lvl) ~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: X HP/5 Mana regen: X (+X per lvl) ~~~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: X HP/5 Movement Speed: 305 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> lvl 18: 305[/h5] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [u][b]Abilities:[/b][/u] [b]Passive(innate) Sacrificial blood:[/b] Gàrraziëm doesn't use mana but HP for his attacks. He has a blood bar that fills for 0.6/0.7/0.8 (lvl 1/7/13) of the HP used to cast an ability. Maximum is 500 sacrificial blood. for every 10 points of blood he gets 1 AP, when blood is used to enhance his abilities the AP bonus stay for another 2 seconds. Also lifesteal/spelvamp abilities/attacks are only 85/70/55% effective against him, meaning you can't heal so well off of him, However the damage by those skills stays the same. [b]Q Maggots from hell:[/b] Gàrraziëm throws a blob of dead and infect flesh and blood crawling with maggots at an enemy. he needs 1 sec. channel time for this. This spell, fears the target for 1 sec and does 120/170/220/270/320 (+0.8 AP) over 5 seconds. Then the blobs drops on the ground and can be picked up like Olaf's axe, the blob stays for 1.5/2/.5/3/3.5 sec. The blob heals Gàrraziëm for 100% or an ally for 75/75/80/80/85% when it's picked up. if you have 200 or more sacrificial blood, you can tap Q within 1 sec after using it to consume 200 blood and increase the fear time by 2 sec. CD: 10 sec HP cost: 130/140/150/160/170 Range: 400 Range after channe: 600 (this means if in the one second somebody flashes away he's at 800 range more or less and won't be hit and the ability is wasted) [b]W Acid Black blood:[/b] Skillshot, Gàrraziëm fires a grenade of blood in a straight line. Using up all his sacrificial blood and doing [0.5*amount of blood (+0.5AP)]^1.05 to the first target hit. Has no extra effect already uses all the blood. CD: 9/9/8/8/7 sec HP cost: 50/60/70/80/90 Range: 700 [b]E Cruentum catenam reaction:[/b] [color=#404040][h5]lightning infested blood[/h5][/color] Fires a bolt of blood at an enemy dealing 70/90/110/130/150 (+0.4 AP) and 50/50/55/55/60% of that to all surrounding allies of the enemy hit within 500 range. Then (after 0.5 sec delay)it jumps to the nearest ally of the enemy hit if there is one within 500 (initial)range, now dealing 20% more damage and hits all within 85%(425 range) of the previous range and jumps to the next one if he's within 425 range. this bolt can jump up to 4 times every time increasing it's damage by 20% and decreasing it's range by 15%. Has to jump to at least to other enemies before it can jump back to the first one. If you have 150 or more sacrificial blood you can tap E within 0.5 sec after using it to consume 150 blood and increase initial range to 600, if you have 300 or more uses 300 you can tap E within 0.5 sec after using it to consume 300 blood and increase initial range to 700. CD: 13/13/12/12/11 sec HP cost: 70/80/90/100/110 (initial) Range: 500 [b]R Primordial hell:[/b] Passive: increases maximum sacrificial blood maximum by 100/200/300 Active: fills sacrificial blood bar by 85% of maximum [b]Q[/b], now does the amount of damage over 3 second instead of 5, allies are healed for 100% and the CD is decreased by 1/1.5/2 sec. [b]W[/b], the exponent is increased to 1.1 from 1.05 and does now AoE for 55% of the damage with a radius of 350/375/400 range [b]E[/b], can now jump up to 5/6/7 times, has a 2 sec decreased CD and the blood bolt travels faster. Activation lasts 10/15/20 sec. CD: 130/100/70 sec. HP: 150 Uses 500 sacrificial blood to activate, (on all levels gives back more) Range: self cast ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [b]Story (WIP):[/b] Gàrraziëm comes from a place far away in the dark corners of the Runeterra, there he lived in a small village it was a harsh life but never the less he liked his life there because all his friends and family lived there. As was normal they were consequently attacked, by ferocious beast, terrifying monsters and other atrocities. But they always managed to keep casualties low and the village more or less intact. However they were very unfortunate as close to their village there was a war going on between vampires and werewolves. Both sides were continuously trying to increase their military power so ass to (easier) destroy and eradicate the other side. Thus the vampires one day attacked Gàrraziëm's village, either killing or turning everybody he knew in a vampire. Even he was bitten by a vampire and if bitten by a vampire there are only 3 possibilities: 1. Your body can't take the stress and you get very ill and die within 3 days If you survive 3 days, at that moment you start graving for blood you want it you need it, you will do every thing for it, now there are 2 things there can happen(second and third possibility). 2. The first vampire that bit you gives you a bit of his blood, turning you into a vampire. 3. You don't get any blood from the vampire, and you start to lose control over your body wanting to drink more and more and finally drinking the blood of another human, at this point you turn into a Vampyro. Vampyros don't have any control over their mind nor body and are beast that act upon instinct, after drinking blood the first time they will set out to find more blood. However every time to drink blood they will need another supply of it faster than the previous time. Normally they die because the interval in between times they need blood is so small they can't get to the next person or they die because they love the blood so much they don't even care if they are shot or hacked upon when they are drinking blood. The only thing that can make them take of their eyes from blood are werewolves, when they see one they go totally mad and must kill it, regarding whatever injuries they might get. Gàrraziëm knew all this, but he didn't want any of these he would never drink the blood of any fellow human being. But he could feel he needed blood, then he had an idea that might possibly work. He drank the blood of one of the cows that were in his village it was the most awful thing he ever tasted, but it subdued his lust for blood and he didn't turn into a Vampyro. But it only worked so long and he knew that eventually it wouldn't keep him from becoming a Vampyro or dying otherwise. So he set out for a quest he went looking for a way to keep him from turning into a Vampyro and at the same moment becoming strong enough to kill all the vampires in existence and probably afterwards the werewolves. At his quest he found several monsters and one of those monster had acid like blood when he tried to drink it he burnt his whole throat. But not long afterwards he found a Devil's layer there he sold his soul so that he could accomplish his goals. He got the power to absorb the power of the 3 first living being of which h drank the blood into his own blood. First he went back to the creature with acid like blood. Second he found another strange monster, a beast infested with maggots as ferocious and dangerous as Sabertigers and as big as giant rats. But the last atrocity he found was his best finding, a monster that was partially created out of electricity and blood, and in which boy continuously chain reaction were created. Afterwards the devil came n front of him and said if I can have all souls of the creatures you kill I will aid you in your fights. But to summon my power isn't easy, you will have t sacrifice a huge amount of blood but the reward won't be small and I will give you the blood back. Do you understand this? and Gàrraziëm nodded and was wonderfully grateful to the devil. Then the devil said: "Then here by from now this day you will wear my symbol on your flesh and be a recruiter from souls as long as I see you worthy and useful enough" and the devil branded a symbol on the back of Gàrraziëm which caused him an excruciating pain like he never felt before. There was a silence for a short moment and then the devil said before disappearing again:"go to The League of Legends and search for a vampire there called Vladimir and kill him and you will have no difficulty killing the rest of the vampire race."[/quote]

[quote=Dotter]I always love your champion ideas Dzeno, there's always something rather unique about them. :) The lore is also quite good ^^ + rep[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]Thank you :D I always appreciate your opinion because you're are a wel respected member here on the forums. I'm very glad that you find my champion ideas unique, because that's is a part of my goal always, If there's nothing unique about I don't find it worth thinking them up because it's not hard to think of more of the same it's hard to think of something unique :).[/quote]

[quote=Dotter]Well then I must say you're good at achieving your goals. I rarely see other champion ideas with so much effort put into them as the ideas you submit ^^ The ulti is awesome and I think CDR would be kinda core on this guy :) Btw, I especially like this idea after I saw an episode of Dead Man Wonderland xD[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]Come on people don't let dotter be the only one to respond. I want more responses QQ[/quote]

[quote=gwadzila]I would make his Q stay on the ground for 3.5 seconds at all levels, make it heal him and allies less, nerf the base damage slightly and remove the channel. Also, I'd either lower or make the fear bonus with blood scale up to 2 seconds-3 second fear available at level 1 is a nightmare. Q has a really really high HP cost... at level 1 you'd be hurting yourself more than your enemy when you used it. W should have a max amount of blood it can use, because with you ult It'll just waste all the blood you have. Also, it really messes you up if you're trying to stack up blood because it will just use it all. That E is a scary ass spell, especially when you have a lot of blood. Basically, when it bounces twice it's doing 140% of the original damage. Hot diggity dawg. I'd make it slowly do less bonus damage, and maybe up the base damage a little bit for compensation. On the ult I would lower the passive bonus a little bit, just seems too high right now. Also, since the ult doesn't last that long there's really no reason to have CDR on your Q or E-It won't make much of a difference if it's only for 10-25 seconds. Also, I'd make the blood cost scale up to 500, since getting 500 blood at level 6 is not easy. I'd lower the CD on the ult a little too.[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno][quote=gwadzila] I would make his Q stay on the ground for 3.5 seconds at all levels, make it heal him and allies less, nerf the base damage slightly and remove the channel. Also, I'd either lower or make the fear bonus with blood scale up to 2 seconds-3 second fear available at level 1 is a nightmare. Q has a really really high HP cost... at level 1 you'd be hurting yourself more than your enemy when you used it. W should have a max amount of blood it can use, because with you ult It'll just waste all the blood you have. Also, it really messes you up if you're trying to stack up blood because it will just use it all. That E is a scary ass spell, especially when you have a lot of blood. Basically, when it bounces twice it's doing 140% of the original damage. Hot diggity dawg. I'd make it slowly do less bonus damage, and maybe up the base damage a little bit for compensation. On the ult I would lower the passive bonus a little bit, just seems too high right now. Also, since the ult doesn't last that long there's really no reason to have CDR on your Q or E-It won't make much of a difference if it's only for 10-25 seconds. Also, I'd make the blood cost scale up to 500, since getting 500 blood at level 6 is not easy. I'd lower the CD on the ult a little too. [/quote] So about Q, fist take a look at [[Dark Binding]] and [[Drain]], draining doing 900 damage over 5 seconds and (+2.25 AP) and healing for 80%. while my Q only does 120/170/220/270/320 (+0.8 AP) [u]over 5 seconds.[/u] Maybe I should decrease the health cost a bit and the fear to 1.5 seconds extra so total is 2.5. Why remove the channel? I think that it should be a balanced skill like this [quote][b]Q Maggots from hell:[/b] Gàrraziëm throws a blob of dead and infect flesh and blood crawling with maggots at an enemy. he needs 1 sec. channel time for this. This spell, fears the target for 1 sec and does 120/170/220/270/320 (+0.8 AP) over [u]5 seconds[/u]. Then the blobs drops on the ground and can be picked up like Olaf's axe, the blob stays for [u]2/2/3/3/3.5[/u] sec. The blob heals Gàrraziëm for 100% or an ally for 75/75/80/80/85% when it's picked up. if you have 200 or more sacrificial blood, you can tap Q within 1 sec after using it to consume 200 blood and increase the fear time by [u]1.5[/u] sec. CD: 10 sec HP cost: [u]90/110/130/150/170[/u] Range: 400 Range after channel: 600 (this means if in the one second somebody flashes away he's at 800 range more or less and won't be hit and the ability is wasted)[/quote] W is your burst skill, it has a maximum (the maximum of your blood bar), the more blood it uses the stronger it relatively is, it's exponential. A possibility could be to that you use 100 blood for this spell per W tap within 0.5 sec or 1 second. Here is a table of it's damge relatively to AP and blood you have at the moment: [quote][code]blood AP: 0 100 200 300 400 500 600 100 60,80209 125,8925 192,7063 260,6643 329,486 399,0041 469,1065 200 125,8925 192,7063 260,6643 329,486 399,0041 469,1065 539,7131 300 192,7063 260,6643 329,486 399,0041 469,1065 539,7131 610,7636 400 260,6643 329,486 399,0041 469,1065 539,7131 610,7636 682,2107 500 329,486 399,0041 469,1065 539,7131 610,7636 682,2107 754,0165 600 399,0041 469,1065 539,7131 610,7636 682,2107 754,0165 826,1498 700 469,1065 539,7131 610,7636 682,2107 754,0165 826,1498 898,5847 800 539,7131 610,7636 682,2107 754,0165 826,1498 898,5847 971,299 With ult on blood AP: 0 100 200 300 400 500 600 100 73,93788 158,4893 247,5714 339,7293 434,2442 530,6808 628,7454 200 158,4893 247,5714 339,7293 434,2442 530,6808 628,7454 728,2257 300 247,5714 339,7293 434,2442 530,6808 628,7454 728,2257 828,9604 400 339,7293 434,2442 530,6808 628,7454 728,2257 828,9604 930,8228 500 434,2442 530,6808 628,7454 728,2257 828,9604 930,8228 1033,711 600 530,6808 628,7454 728,2257 828,9604 930,8228 1033,711 1137,539 700 628,7454 728,2257 828,9604 930,8228 1033,711 1137,539 1242,238 800 728,2257 828,9604 930,8228 1033,711 1137,539 1242,238 1347,745 [/code] [/quote] For the E skill, this skill seems OP that's true but look at the range for the 6th and 7th bounce it's very small almost melee range and it's not necesarily so that the a person gets hit by all seven hits, maybe just be the last or first one. This skill just make's it so a team will have to spread out when in a teamfight or face the consequences, it's a very tactical skill. It's Ap ratio might be a bit high, I can agree on that, but i'm not sure. [quote][code] dmg per bounce AP ratio 1 150 0,4 2 180 0,48 3 216 0,576 4 259,2 0,6912 5 311,04 0,82944 6 373,248 0,995328 7 447,8976 1,194394 Max Dmg Min Dmg 1 150 0,4 150 0,4 2 258 0,688 258 0,688 3 387,6 1,0336 387,6 1,0336 4 646,8 1,7248 543,12 1,44832 5 833,424 2,222464 729,744 1,945984 6 1057,373 2,819661 1102,992 2,941312 7 1505,27 4,014054 1371,731 3,657948 range someone has to be within for next bounce 500 700 425 595 361,25 505,75 307,0625 429,8875 261,0031 365,4044 221,8527 310,5937 (as you can see very small range) 188,5748 264,0047 (irrelevant thre's no eight bounce) [/code] [/quote] Why would it be OP that you can store 800 blood? (at death blood counter is 0 again, at W use the same) I'll show you the difference of the CD on Q and E with ult on. first of all 1 or 2 seconds difference are extremely much in a (team)fight. secondly with lvl 3 ult: with CDR almost impossible to cast 3 times within ult 0,10 and 20 sec wih CDR 0, 8, 16 (very plausible to cast 3 times) same with E 0, 11 and 22 (impossible) 0, 9 and 18 (plausible) furthermore if I make it last longer, it won't be necesary to decrese the CD or viceversa. Because the actuall CD at lvl 3 ult at the moment is 50 seconds (70-20 of activated time) maybe I'll increse the starting time from 10 to 15, make it 15/20/25 seconds.[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]what do you guys think about the changes I want to make in the Q skill: [B]Q Maggots from hell:[/B] Gàrraziëm throws a blob of dead and infect flesh and blood crawling with maggots at an enemy. he needs 1 sec. channel time for this. This spell, fears the target for 1 sec and does 120/170/220/270/320 (+0.8 AP) over 5 seconds. Then the blobs drops on the ground and can be picked up like Olaf's axe, the blob stays for[I] from 1.5/2/.5/3/3.5[/I] [U]to 2/2/3/3/3.5[/U] sec. The blob heals Gàrraziëm for 100% or an ally for 75/75/80/80/85% when it's picked up. if you have 200 or more sacrificial blood, you can tap Q within 1 sec after using it to consume 200 blood and increase the fear time by [I]from 2[/I] [U]to 1.5[/U] sec. CD: 10 sec HP cost: [I]from 130/140/150/160/170[/I] [U]to 90/110/130/150/170[/U] Range: 400 Range after channel: 600 (this means if in the one second somebody flashes away he's at 800 range more or less and won't be hit and the ability is wasted)[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]I wanna make some impacting changes, hope everybody agrees with them. [QUOTE][b]W Acid Black blood:[/b] Skillshot, Gàrraziëm fires a grenade of blood in a straight line. Using up all his sacrificial blood and doing [U][80/85/9095/100+ 0.35*amount of blood (+0.35AP)]^1.065[/U] magic damage to the first target hit. first deals half damage to the enemy and the other half over 4 seconds [U]if you have less then 400 blood will use all blood if you have more will use 400 unless you tap w again within 0.5 seconds, then it uses up the rest of you blood.[/U] CD: 9/9/8/8/7 sec HP cost: 50/60/70/80/90 Range: 700[/QUOTE] and his ult: [QUOTE][B]R Primordial hell:[/B] Passive: increases maximum sacrificial blood maximum by 100/200/300 Active: fills sacrificial blood bar by 85% of maximum Q, now does the amount of damage over 3 second instead of 5, allies are healed for 100% and the CD is decreased by 1/1.5/2 sec. W, the exponent is increased to [U]1.13[/U] from 1.065 and does now AoE for 55% of the damage with a radius of 350/375/400 range, also the [u]4 seconds DoT is decreased to 2 seconds.[/u] E, can now jump up to 5/6/7 times, has a 2 sec decreased CD and the blood bolt travels faster. Activation lasts [U]15/20/25[/U] sec. CD: 130/100/70 sec. HP: [U]150/250/350 (-0.2/0.4/0.8 per blood used after 250)[/U] Uses [U]250 to 500[/U] sacrificial blood to activate, (on all levels gives back more) Range: self cast[/QUOTE] furthermore wanna change his passive a bit as well: [QUOTE]Gàrraziëm doesn't use mana but HP for his attacks. He has a blood bar that fills for [i]from 0.6/0.7/0.8[/i] [u]to 0.8[/u] of the HP used to cast an ability. Maximum is 500 sacrificial blood. for every 10 points of blood he gets 1 AP, when blood is used to enhance his abilities the AP bonus stay for another 2 seconds. Also lifesteal/spelvamp abilities/attacks against him are only 85/70/55% (lvl 1/7/13) effective, meaning you can't heal so well on him, However the damage by those skills stays the same.[/QUOTE][/quote]