I disagree with how you've been going around downvoting the other Talon guides and advertising yours, but I think this is a good build. The top Talon guide used to be decent before he edited it after Talon's "nerf". Now it doesn't have anywhere near enough AD to utilize Talon's burst properly. As a suggestion, whenever I've got sufficiently high AD I sometimes get a Phantom Dancer. I know Talon's not an auto attack champion, but let's face it, once you've got 330 AD, your burst will have them on low health by which point they'll do anything they can to run. Phantom Dancer will help you chase after them and use a few auto attacks to finish them off. Also, I usually go for a Bloodthirster earlier in the game for survivability. It's hard to take down a hard AD carry like Xin Zhao when they just regenerate their health extremely fast auto attacking you. You need lifesteal to stay in the fight long enough to either kill him with your auto attacks, or buy enough time for your spells to cooldown.

Also, your guide is very unorganized, you should consider reading jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide to use some coding, to make it look a little more neat. But all in all, this is a good build and represents how Talon is meant to be played.