Super AS and Crit don't give you anything without penetration and lifesteal. Your Ashe have ultimate survilabilty... but dont have ability to counter-attack and duel very well.

wtf did i just read

I guess that is true. However, the reason I picked up the Trinity Force is for the extra critical chance as well as the attack speed. The AD and extra health help as well. Another Phantom Dancer would be absolutely pointless, and I like having the 2.5 crits per second. I will agree that the crits do not do an incredible amount of damage, but it can add up very quickly with 2.5 of them per second. However, thanks for the input, and I will try to find another combination to drop the Trinity Force and still have all the stats that I like.

With no Armor Pen, the crits you would be doing will not amount to much. It would be in your best interest to take out either the Attack Speed Runes or Quints and get this build some Armor Penetration.

Also, Trinity Force is in no way shape or form needed on Ashe ever, since she already has 3 slowing capabilities in her toolkit in the first place. Drop this like a bad habit and pick up Black Cleaver for some Armor Shred.

hmf...

That is true. There is almost no attack damage, but the way this lines up, it is a guaranteed crit on each shot, and 2.5 crits per second at 500+ damage per crit is a really quick way to drain an enemy's health. That and the mobility are the entire point of this build.
Also, thank you for the guide to building a guide. I have never really needed to write code, so this is obviously a first.

Not much to look at here. just a wall of text and no coding whatsoever. I reccomend looking at jhoijhoi's guide to making a guide. which u can find here. And the items arent that great. All attack speed and not alot of attack damage wont help you much.