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I need someone to take a look at a very long...

Creator: GamingRoots December 24, 2011 3:42pm
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Hey MOBAfire. I just wrote this up today off the top of my head and I know it's VERY LONG but that's why i'm coming to you with that warning. I think I have a guide that can help people to play Malzahar but i'm not sure it's even comprehendable with the way i've written it, or with the length of the guide itself. I really wanna get some revision done on it ASAP so i'd like to get some views on it check it out if you think you have the patience.
Heres the link. I don't really like the name but it's something I think to myself "Somebody's gotta play the op character well" Just click on my name or whatever and search my builds since it gave me some weird message about build advertising >.>


Thanks for your time and consideration I really REALLY appreciate any input you have for me.
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Just quickly scrolled through it. Boring.

Giant walls of text and no coding at all. Images say more than words. Use them.
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I accept what you say about it being boring and nothing but giant walls of text but I don't think I can turn those words into pictures easy that's going to describe what i'm saying. There's a reason there's so much of it. I can code to make it easier for the brain to seperate and associate concepts but I think i'll try and make videos with action of what i'm talking about to get it across better.

I don't really believe it's my responsibility to entertain although I understand the value of good synapsis. I want to test my hand at educating so i'll give it a shot maybe put in jokes or whatever. Like I said I know it's a big wall of text but what I want to know is if you can read it and learn from it or am I skipping basics and just providing in game examples that no one can relate to except me.
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I'll take a look after Christmas. Alternatively, why don't you request in the review threads? :)
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I dunno I just wanted someone to look at it XD.

Don't worry about it people i'm going tot ake what Lugi said into consideration first and i'll post another thread in I guess the REview threads section when i'm done attempting to transform this into something that doesn't make me feel like a University professor

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