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First build how did I do? feedback wanted...

Creator: sixilli May 5, 2012 11:37am

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Well this is my first guide on mobafire and I hope you guys enjoy it. I made it kinda minimalistic so people can get as much out of it as fast as possible. I have found myself wasting hours reading guides and then realizing I don't care for them or their logic to the specific build kinda off.

To make this more specific. What sections would you guys like to be added? I feel like what I have is enough to be good but not enough to be great.
Future Update list
-Laning phase
-Team Fights
-Runes
-Masteries
-More on who counters you and what to do about it
- Optional item builds when and how they are viable.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/competative-viktor-208694?revision=1
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Anyone have any feedback?
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Thank you for bumping this topic, it must have slipped my mind. I am on it right now! :)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Don't do it Icecreamy, it's a trap!

Anyway, sixilli, it's great that you're trying to show us your build but, you can't just make a thread saying "check my build out kthnxbai." It's against the forum's rules.

Try requesting it in one of the review threads or linking it after a game when you do amazingly.
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Well it might be against the rules but I can't help but sympathize with authors who spent time writing guides, yet do not receive any votes or comments.

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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So before this gets closed (I feel for ya, really no way to get your guides advertised here >.>):
* Viktor actually kinda walks all over Ahri. You have to dodge the charm which can be tricky when Ahris try and walk right up to you (no kidding, free week was nonstop ahri just coming point-blank then trying to charm me where it took no effort to hit) but you outdamage and out-trade her otherwise.
* Competative > Competitive
* Have you considered WotA? I don't buy it till lategame if I need it, but it helps tremendously with being focused.
* I'd love to see you expand on skill usage (especially laser, that could use a ton of explanation), runes/masteries, etc.
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RCIX wrote:

So before this gets closed (I feel for ya, really no way to get your guides advertised here >.>):
* Viktor actually kinda walks all over Ahri. You have to dodge the charm which can be tricky when Ahris try and walk right up to you (no kidding, free week was nonstop ahri just coming point-blank then trying to charm me where it took no effort to hit) but you outdamage and out-trade her otherwise.
* Competative > Competitive
* Have you considered WotA? I don't buy it till lategame if I need it, but it helps tremendously with being focused.
* I'd love to see you expand on skill usage (especially laser, that could use a ton of explanation), runes/masteries, etc.


Thanks for this and I hope this doesn't get closed. I wasn't just asking for you guys too look at my guide I wanted criticism for it to make it even better. I will write a guide on how to use skills and combos differently. The WotA is a great item but I find that since you only have 5 items there really isn't any room for it. Void staff is vital to your late game damage and the hourglass gives better survivability in my eyes than WotA. Sure WotA has spell vamp but is that really worth being able to go invulnerable for a few seconds?

Thanks to everyone of all the great feedback I will work on the guide and add a few more sections after school. They will probably be
-Advanced skill usage
-laning phase
-Team Fighting
-Alternate builds
-Summoner spells
-Brief rune and masteries explanation
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advertising o.o. Enuf said.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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advertising o.o. Enuf said.


I tried updating my OP to where I'm asking about sections that people can see fit adding in. Hopefully they won't see this thread as advertising but see it as someone who wants an outside opinion on the contents of my guide.
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Big update here. I found a quote on viktor from a red(riot employee), thanks to reign of gaming.
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