Xeno's Review and Matchup Shop

[quote=Xenotechie]GAH! Still a good guide, tho. Can someone send over a bad guide? Need to break the upvote streak :D [spoiler] I never really got why nobody plays [[Poppy]]. Anyways, you should have a fairly easy time getting in the top 5 guides here :D. [list] [*] [color=#ff0000][b]GAH NO I AM NOT LISTENING THIS NOT EVERYONE READING IS A 13 YEAR OLD BISEXUAL[/b][/color] lol jk i still dislike kpop and jpop tho.[color=#000000] Also, that would make great AMA material.[/color] [*] Your pros/cons are ever so slightly off center. [*] You shouldn't list what the masteries you take give, but rather, why do you want them. [*] Wait, you use [[Ghost]] to get back in lane. The cooldown is not THAT short. [*] You definitely want a lot more gameplay information in the future, and that means matchups, general tips, game phases, perhaps a mindset section, you know the deal. This is currently your main problem. [/list] Still, what you have here is a really nice guide. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Sujing]Summoner Level: 30 Link to the guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/maokai-jungling-with-the-tree-186254]Click here, thanks![/url] Have you read the guide to making a guide?: Yep! Have I reviewed your guide before?: No. Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: Structure, and overall points that I made. Anything I should know?: I have not completed one chapter, "Ganking" for Junglers/Others. I hope that doesn't really interfere with your review.[/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie]FYI guys, a bunch of jerks or a guy IP hacking downvoted ALL the top 5 [[Taric]] guides recently. Might want to go check them out and do some counter trolling. [spoiler] Impressive. One of the best guides I have seens in quite a while. Since there aren't really any things to complain about in the general sense, and all of my small complaints were elaborated in detail by SkullzX in his review, including some stuff I didn't even think about, I will start out by focusing on what you wanted. The layout is pretty good, with the chapter order feeling natural, but there are a few things that put me off. First off, the items section just feels... weird. I can't quite put my finger on what it is, but I feel that it could have a far better layout from an aesthetic standpoint. The second and final problem is that the way you laid our the ganking section just kinda annoys me when I seach for a specific champion due to the way you put the icons. As for you making points, well, absolutely no complaints there. All in all, what I would want to say has been said, and you definitely deserve a [color=#00ff00]+1[/color] for such a detailed guide. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=SkullzX][quote=Xenotechie] [spoiler] Impressive. One of the best guides I have seens in quite a while. Since there aren't really any things to complain about in the general sense, and all of my small complaints were elaborated in detail by SkullzX in his review, including some stuff I didn't even think about, I will start out by focusing on what you wanted. [/spoiler] [/quote] I will take this as a compliment *batman's away*[/quote]

[quote=Sujing][quote=Xenotechie] FYI guys, a bunch of jerks or a guy IP hacking downvoted ALL the top 5 [[Taric]] guides recently. Might want to go check them out and do some counter trolling. [spoiler] Impressive. One of the best guides I have seens in quite a while. Since there aren't really any things to complain about in the general sense, and all of my small complaints were elaborated in detail by SkullzX in his review, including some stuff I didn't even think about, I will start out by focusing on what you wanted. The layout is pretty good, with the chapter order feeling natural, but there are a few things that put me off. First off, the items section just feels... weird. I can't quite put my finger on what it is, but I feel that it could have a far better layout from an aesthetic standpoint. The second and final problem is that the way you laid our the ganking section just kinda annoys me when I seach for a specific champion due to the way you put the icons. As for you making points, well, absolutely no complaints there. All in all, what I would want to say has been said, and you definitely deserve a [color=#00ff00]+1[/color] for such a detailed guide. [/spoiler] [/quote] Thank you! I will find a way to make it look better as I kinda do feel that I could have made it better. For the Ganking chapter, I didn't want to make the icons only on one side, so I thought about alternating it. If I can, I will figure out a better way to format it. Thank you for your review![/quote]

[quote=MysticalZelda]Summoner Level: 30 Link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/into-the-night-evelynn-jungle-242829 Have you read the guide to making a guide?: Yes Have I reviewed your guide before?: No Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: Please have a good look at my grammar and spelling, since English isn't my first language Anything I should know?: Not really.[/quote]

[quote=Totallynotn00b]You [u] want [/u] bad guides? o.O Blahhhh. never thought I would say that I want a good one just so I can lower my blood pressure a tad. <.<[/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie][quote=Totallynotn00b] You [u] want [/u] bad guides? o.O Blahhhh. never thought I would say that I want a good one just so I can lower my blood pressure a tad. <.< [/quote] Being somewhere near the calmness level of a monk really helps with this thing. Seriously, tho, the worse the guide is, the more detailed I tend to write up reviews, and I feel good when I write a long one. Also, FYI: I am going to do any reviews I have planned right now tommorow, as I am too tired to even update the original post.[/quote]

[quote=SkullzX]does anyone even use your match shop option?[/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie][quote=SkullzX] does anyone even use your match shop option? [/quote] Yeah, Amazing Monkey used it. The stuff I did should be up when he does that banner art of his. Couldn't do all of them because I was puking my guts out at the time, but now I can, so, if he wants me to, he can just give a PM. Anyways, a PM request for [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-philosophize-with-a-hammer-239368]a Poppy guide[/url] came first, so... yeah, time to crosspost. [spoiler] Well, sorry for a late review, I was really tired last night. Time to fix this, so let's start a list: [list] [*] "She's able to charge into a team fight, quickly burst down her chosen target, and run out relatively unscathed." I'd say she is able to run IN unscathed and then proceed to start running like hell or start murdering everyone, depending on how well the game is going. [*] "This acts not unlike Vayne's [[Condemn]]" It's the other way round, really :D [*] " and has seen many Poppy's nexus diving two or three players" [url=http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/Nexus_Obelisk]Uhh, no.[/url] [*] Your AD vs AP section has some quite unclear wording, like [[Devastating Blow]] scaling off AD, which is not true per se. [*] Your cheat sheet and items are inconsistent, in both the item chapter and the text in general. [*] Might want to explain those alternative runes in the text of the guide. [*] You got a few misspellings in the mastery section. [*] Have you considered getting [[Heart of Gold]] instead of the [[Philosopher's Stone]] early on? Speaking of items, you have a few misspellings, but the items make sense. Just make sure you sync up the cheatsheet with this and everything should be OK. [/list] This stuff is all pretty minor, tho. This is a pretty well written guide with a few factual errors and some room for improvement, mostly for matchups, and pretty much deserves an upvote. [/spoiler][/quote]