Xeno's Review and Matchup Shop

[quote=Xenotechie]Sorry, guys, blame Dark Souls. Time to get back on this. First off the Jungle Nunu guide. I'll get to those matchups soonish. Not the best with jungle, tho, might take some time. [Spoiler] Sorry for the late review, blame Dark souls and DOTA 2. In all seriousness, school sapped some of my free time off. Okay, the list: [list] [*] Those multiple runes in the cheatsheet can be confusing. Oftentimes, someone will just check up on a guide in champ select and wants some quick info, and, well... yeah. Just saying. If you do want to do this, explain it as early as possibly in your guide. [*] I have seen 9-12-9 being run quite often for [[Nunu]] these days. Try to explain why don't yot take that. [*] I think you miss an empty line in the summoner spell section. Nothing wrong about the spells themselves, tho, fairly standard stuff. You do need to explain ALL your rune choices, ie. not just mention them as possible substitutes, but rather why are they good substitutes. [*] Might want some GP10s in the items section, it's not that easy to farm up a [[Rod of Ages]]. I read your FAQ, but you can't always expect things to go well. Speaking of that, you definitely want more options. If you think someone would build something on a jungle / lane [[Nunu]], add it and mention why or why not to take it. [*] You wanted some focus on the jungling section, so you'll have it. First off, where's the video? It should upload by now, it has, like 2 weeks to do so. At any rate, you want more info. Nunu is a well-documented counter-jungler, make sure the reader learns where can they expect the jungler to be when, say, you finish blue, and what you should steal. What you have could also use expansion, especially the teamfight section. At least mention that you should avoid ulting if someone can interrupt you and is smart enough to do so. A warding section would be nice. [/list] Normally, I probably wouldn't give an upvote here. However, because I was so late, I will give you an upvote. You are seriously lacking on the gameplay department and that is quite a weakness, but the rest of the guide is competent. Do note that this upvote is subject to change if I find that there is no improvement in sight. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie]And now, ze [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZThquH5t0ow]bird.[/url] Took me long enough, eh? [spoiler] Sorry for the quite late review, in all seriousness, I was quite busy with school. And the guide is quite good, I must say! [list] [*] Gotta love how you realize that people underestimate DoTs. [*] ...yeah, I don't have a lot to say about how ridiculously good this is. [url=http://www.myinstants.com/instant/batman/]To the matchup section[/url]! [*] Don't towerdive [[Anivia]] early on. Period. You just don't have the damage. [*] Your [[Annie]] section has this: "A natural pusher, so prone to be ganked." While that is grammatically incorrect and technically correct, a smart [[Annie]] won't use her [[Incinerate]] in lane if anyone is with her. Pushing = ganks only applies when the pushing is [b]UNINTENTIONAL[/b]. She is weak to ganks because she has no escapes. Your best bet with her is just stay out of her range long enough for her to decide the stun isn't worth it, then make her regret that. [*] You got a code error in the [[Fizz]] section. Also, you advise to harass at level 1. I would discourage that because of minion aggro. Those little buggers can hurt. [*] It's space AIDS, goddamit, not [[Malzahar]] AIDS! :D [*] I see [[Viktor]] has been given the respect he deserves. You will join the glorious evolution a lot more peacefully, I promise. [*] Some info on [[Zilean]]: If he bombs you, run in your own minions in order to push the lane towards your tower, but he can't really do a lot more than bomb you twice quickly, so he should be fairly easy to catch if you grab him pre-6. After that, tho, he's like [[Anivia]], in that you don't want to dive the guy. If his harass is giving you problem, ask for a jungler to help. [/list] All in all, have a green banner. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=bsurma]Summoner Level: 30 Link to the guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/will-dunk-for-feed-a-guide-to-the-hand-of-noxus-242143]Here.[/url] Have you read the guide to making a guide?: Yes. Have I reviewed your guide before?: No. Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: Just want to hear someone else's opinion in general, nothing special. Anything I should know?: Not at all, except that I hate the Warmog + Atma's combination. lol[/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie]Guess what? I had some time now. [spoiler] Okay, as much as I hate people not being able to counter [[Darius]] and generally being idiots, and hating him by proxy, let's start the list. [list] [*] It's always hate messages, mate. Some of them from your own team. [*] You should consider making those line dividers wider, I feel they would look a lot nicer. [*] One thing you can mention: you can change the masteries around a bit before the game in champion select, so, for example, you can take [[Resistance]] if you are going up against [[Swain]] top. [*] [[Trinity Force]]? This is probably the only time I have seen it work on a champion without any AP scaling. Really good item selection, tho, you could want a "don't buy these" section, because, well, it's [[Darius]]. Make of that what you will. [*] Okay, this is a nice custom HUD. Where did you find it? On topic, using pictures to demonstrate items is always a plus for me. [*] Fun fact about [[Garen]] if he is harassing you with Q and E, chances are, he did not use [[Courage]]. You know, the flat damage reducing thingy? Also, he is completely manaless AND has sustain, a thing [[Darius]] hates, so I'd say you could bump his difficulty up a notch. Nothing bad about the other matchups, as far as I can see. You do need to emphasise how a jungler can ruin your day, because he can if you get cocky enough. [/list] What you have here is a really good guide! You might want to add some videos, tho. If you need some jungling stuff, check out [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtKRogRZvTA&feature=plcp]Stonewall[/url], but, at any rate, have a [color=#00ff00]+1[/color]. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=koridjinn]Summoner level: 30 Link to Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/diana-the-moons-vengeance-solo-top-mid-jungle-236298 Have you read the guide to making a guide?: Yup Have I reviewed your guide before: Nope. Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: In my jungling guide, my BB-coding has seem to gone wrong...everything, and I mean EVERYTHING is centered and it looks terrible. Do you think you could tell me where I went wrong? Anything I should know?: My guide isn't quite finished yet. I'm still waiting to put some matchups on after I've played some more games with Diana. I think I've voted on your guide already...if not I will do so right away![/quote]

[quote=Xenotechie]Think the other reviewers hae tackled the issue of your build better. Still, a decent guide. [spoiler] Let me get this out of the way first: The guide is pretty decent, but it has it's flaws. [list] [*] Take a look at your cheat sheets. Specifically, number 2. The skill order is all wrong. [*] Your runes are really weird. First off, mr seals are non-primary, consider replacing them. Then, you have mana regen quints. Just get mana regen seals if you need mana regen that much, and if you want magic resistance, grab glyphs. [*] I'd say [[Malady]] is a way better option for [[Diana]] than [[Nashor's Tooth]]. Other people have said tons about Nashor's being bad, I'll just keep at this being my personal opinion. [*] I think you could put points into [[Hardiness]] and [[Resistance]] before the game situationally, and then use the remaining points from the other one to get [[Veteran's Scars]]. 40 extra HP at level 1 could save your life. [*] I saw you use single brackets occasionally for some BBcoding and make it fail as a result. Just ctrl+f search for them and you'll find where you messed up. Also, you forget some apostrophes in your BBcoding, and mess up [[Doran's Blade]] and something else, I think. [*] Consider a "don't buy this" ection for the guide. There is some stuff I have seen [[Diana]]s build that don't really make sense. [*] I don't know what you wanted with the Jungling order section without the base code, but, if you didn't want everything centered, it is possible you forgot to close a [/center] or [/column] command. [*] Matchups, maybe? Just a thought. [/list] I don't have a lot more to say. Enjoy your [color=#00ff00]+1[/color]. It can still use a lot improvement, tho. Your runes are your biggest problem, and, well, the build just kinda feels off, the people who know more about the subject have said their mind. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=MejickPuf]Summoner Level: 30 Link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/renekton-territorial-agressiveness-jungle-update-249445 Have you read the guide to making a guide?: Yes sir. Have I reviewed your guide before?: No sir. Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: Nothing specific. Just an overall review. Anything I should know?: Not really.[/quote]

[quote=Turtality]Summoner Level: 30 Link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/hybridamere-carry-in-3v3-226645 Have you read the guide to making a guide?: YES Have I reviewed your guide before?: NO Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what?: NO Anything I should know?: It's a 3v3 guide, thinks work a little differently.[/quote]

[quote=Svinka]Summoner Level: 30 d Link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/hybrid-kayle-the-divine-carry-250279 Have you read the guide to making a guide? Nope Have I reviewed your guide before? Nope Anything specific you want reviewed, and if so, what? Nope Anything I should know? You don't put ":" after "?".[/quote]

[quote=Phil15]Summoner level:30 Link to guide:[url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-man-in-the-jungle-249161]here it is[/url] Have you read the guide to making a guide? Yes long life to Jhoi Have I reviewed your guide before? Np Anything specific: I want an honest review to know if I can do a decent guide Why do you want your guide reviewed? I want constructive criticism and to improve my guide. I really want to know how I could improve my guide. Anything I should know? English is not my first language so you might find a load of grammatical errors[/quote]