Solid guide, but there are still a few mistakes that need to be fixed. Ancient Golem grants CDR not AP. That is just one noticeable error. Otherwise than that, this is a great, in-depth guide.

Hi Charizard (incidentally, one of the only Pokemon I EVER levelled past 70 :P), just dropping by for a quick review.

Let me start by saying that this is possibly the most in-depth guide I have seen on MobaFire, and I have seen quite a few in my time. Secondly, I don't know much about Akali, so I'll have to take your word for it.

CHEAT SHEET: I think you need a little more information in your cheat sheet. For newer players, it's really beneficial for them to be able to build item by item. So for example, which component of Hextech Gunblade should be built first on Akali? etc etc - you don't have to go into HUGE depth here, but it can help make your cheat sheet more comprehensive.

UNNECESSARY INFORMATION: There are some parts of your guide that I wouldn't include, even FOR new LoL players. Things that you don't really need: champion spotlight (the information will most likely contradict your guide), acronym list, lore, lore reading, bad summoner spells (never waste space on things like Clarity and Clairvoyance for AP casters) and gold/10 items. I realise that you only mean well by adding these in, but you really need to think about whether it's beneficial for the reader, or just fluff :)

AESTHETICS: I think you've got this down pat for a lot of your chapters, but some areas look odd. Like the (rules) you have everywhere - they don't quite match. I personally also don't like blocks of centred text. In terms of icons, just be wary, because the larger they get, the more pixelated they look. When using columns, ensure you add an extra column between content columns so the text doesn't touch together.

CHAPTER ORDER: It's sort of all over the place. There isn't a "set" structure to use, but generally speaking, things like Summoner Spells, Runes and Masteries are bundled together for ease of use. Champion abilities and gameplay are often close to each other. And the item chapter normally comes before/after the gameplay.

SPELLING/GRAMMAR: I've noticed that you have a lot of typos in your guide and I realise that not everyone has a perfect grasp of the English language, but it's quite simple to install a spell check on your computer and just check for squiggly red lines. In addition to spelling errors, there are a lot of weird word association errors. Please also follow punctuation with the appropriate functions, such as capitalisation :)

SPOILERS: Spoilers can really revamp your guide length. For example, you could add spoilers to your Change Log and even to the champion match up section. This "saves" space and makes it easier for the reader to select which aspects of the guide they actually want to read.

So I hope this helped a little! Good luck with your guide :) +1
- jhoijhoi

Well I just had a look at your guide and quite enjoyed but everyone's guide is just their own thoughts and people need to find ones that fit closest to theirs but they are just the beginning so I think you did a good job with yours and mine too though I am not one to boast.

It really hurts me to bump up your guide since I've made my own but seriously this is better than 80% of the guides on mobafire seriously good job bro.

the build is to general is the generic build it has nothing overly special about it. but the guide is well made Overall 50-50.

You focus on AP for all 4 builds i believe that a guide should show all aspects of a champion if they are going to say it's a "perfect" thing its like receiving present but all you get is a box and no present or a taco shell with no meat you can't not have a piece of a champion otherwise how are you to understand that champ. but this is my opinion so if you think im being rude disregard all of this and just ignore me lol.

You focus on AP for all 4 builds i believe that a guide should show all aspects of a champion if they are going to say it's a "perfect" thing its like receiving present but all you get is a box and no present or a taco shell with no meat you can't not have a piece of a champion otherwise how are you to understand that champ. but this is my opinion so if you think im being rude disregard all of this and just ignore me lol.

Thanks ill put these points and see what I can do with them thanks again

Really good job with the laning section! I definitely use it a lot.
The only commentary that I would have is more information on her skills, their uses, and the reasoning behind why you need certain runes / masteries. Once that's set, I would guess that this is one of the best Akali guides out there. Great job!

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