Leverus, The master of electricity.

[quote=Vandore]Role: Ranged, Mid, ap carry. "You cannot control me. i control you." ~Leverus Lore: Leverus was abandoned by his parents when he was born, leaving him at the steps of a castle. The ones who took him in did not do it out of kindness, but out of greed. They made Leverus scrub the floors, dust the shelves, cook the food, and in return, gave him bread and water. So it was inevitable that Leverus would run away. After stumbling through the woods, he came to a cottage. Knocking on the door, he was welcomed kindly by a man, and was fed food. Soon the man's friends and family came, all excited and chatting. They all sat at a long table, Leverus sitting next to the man. All went well, but then the screeching of metal and the sound of hard footsteps were heard by all, then the door was blown off with a crackle of static. Leverus looked up and saw a hooded man, who looked rather familiar. The man stared at him, with bright blue glowing eyes. Everyone ran and screamed, leaving Leverus alone with the man. Then the room began to glow, getting brighter and brighter. When Leverus awoke, he felt something strange running through his veins. Electricity. He found metal bars laying next to him, but the man was gone. Then a little memory probed his mind. He remembered the castle he grew up in, filled with nasty, nasty people. Then his fingers began to crackle with electricity arching between the tips of his fingers. Abilities. Electricity throw. Q: throws his metal bars, striking the first thing it hits, dealing (50,60,70,80,90,) ability power. (9/8/7/6/5) cd. (70/65/60/55/50) mana cost. 50% of ap) 700 range. Electricity Chain W: He points his bars to a enemy champion, throwing a electricity chain. if it stays on them for 3 seconds it stuns them. dealing (10,20,30,40,60.) ability power. using (70/80/90/100/110) mana. (10/8/7.5/7) cd. 20% of ap) 500 range. Electricity Shield E: He throws his bars at an enemy champion, puting electricity all around them. dealing (70,80,90,100,110.) ability power. using (100/90/80/70/60) mana. (12/11/10/9/8) cd. 32% of ap) 900 range. R: Electricity comes out of his bars, damaging all enemy champions. dealing (130,140,150,160,200.) ability power. using (130/120/110/100/90) mana. (90/80/70) cd. (45% of ap) 1000 range. Passive: Static Charge: Each time Leverus auto attacks, he gains a buff that gives him 3/5/7/9/11 ability power for 5 seconds. This buff can stack up to 5 times.[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]OKAY I have decided to adopt editing Champion ideas, since Dillbutt won't do it xD So, You might want to add how much of his AP is added to the total damage dealt, it gives a better idea of how OP he might be. If you're unsure about this, look at other champion's stats and abilities, and see which is most similar to his abilities. Also, he seems rather similar to [[Syndra]]. Add mana cost and cooldowns as well, and how far he can move the bars around. I'll review this again tomorrow to see if any changes are made.[/quote]

[quote=Sventes]While I do like the overall deisgn of the champion, mainly cause electricity is plain awesome, I have a few problems. The first thing is that Alot of his ablities seem to be huge amounts of damage, but you didnt include thing like cooldowns and mana costs. If you wanted him to be "balanced"( and i use this term losely) both of those things would have to be fairly high. 2: The other problem is his passive. Gonna say it right now. It's BROKEN. Considering that in a simple laning phase, a ranged ap carry will do at least 200-500 autao attacks, that can mean anywhere from 10- 50 free ablity power, regardless of items, runes or masteries( meele like Kat would have about half of that). Thats way too strong, considering I could just build a Malady in late game and just go auto attack Baron or Dragon and get free ability power. A possible fix for this would a temporary buff. Something like: Passive: Static Charge: Each time Leverus auto attacks, he gains a buff that gives him 3/5/7/9/11 ability power for 5 seconds. This buff can stack up to 5 times. Other than those things, I like the overall design and would like to see more from you! Keep it up![/quote]

[quote=Vandore]Guys, i did all of it, but idk how long the range is.. for example 800. idk how long that is O.o some tips would be helpful :D[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Try out some champions with ranged abilities, then check in the Info place to see how far that is! It will help you get an idea on the range. EDIT: Also, his W seems a little bit overpowered, seeing its short cooldown and low mana, basically letting you stun a champion constantly. Also, his passive also seems very overpowered, especially early game. The max stats of that will give you 55 AP? Daaang.[/quote]

[quote=Vandore][quote=devdevil] Try out some champions with ranged abilities, then check in the Info place to see how far that is! It will help you get an idea on the range. EDIT: Also, his W seems a little bit overpowered, seeing its short cooldown and low mana, basically letting you stun a champion constantly. Also, his passive also seems very overpowered, especially early game. The max stats of that will give you 55 AP? Daaang. [/quote] No, it only gives u 11 ap. read it.[/quote]

[quote=Vandore]Guys, maybe u could write me a lore O.o i dont realy like mine... and its kinda boring. im realy bad at writing -_-[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]You say that the buff can stack up to five times, so when it's at maximum level, he can stack 11 AP every auto attack. 5 times 11 equals 55... I might do a lore, but I just got back from vacation so, still unpacking and all :/[/quote]

[quote=Vandore][quote=devdevil] You say that the buff can stack up to five times, so when it's at maximum level, he can stack 11 AP every auto attack. 5 times 11 equals 55... I might do a lore, but I just got back from vacation so, still unpacking and all :/ [/quote]no... what i mean by "this buff can stack up to 5 times" is 3, thats one stack, 6, thats the 2nd stack, and ec. not 11 times 5[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Here's my lore for your champion, I tried to have it relate to your lore a bit :) Leverus was abandoned by his parents when he was born, leaving him at the steps of a castle. The ones who took him in did not do it out of kindness, but out of greed. They made Leverus scrub the floors, dust the shelves, cook the food, and in return, gave him bread and water. So it was inevitable that Leverus would run away. After stumbling through the woods, he came to a cottage. Knocking on the door, he was welcomed kindly by a man, and was fed food. Soon the man's friends and family came, all excited and chatting. They all sat at a long table, Leverus sitting next to the man. All went well, but then the screeching of metal and the sound of hard footsteps were heard by all, then the door was blown off with a crackle of static. Leverus looked up and saw a hooded man, who looked rather familiar. The man stared at him, with bright blue glowing eyes. Everyone ran and screamed, leaving Leverus alone with the man. Then the room began to glow, getting brighter and brighter. When Leverus awoke, he felt something strange running through his veins. Electricity. He found metal bars laying next to him, but the man was gone. Then a little memory probed his mind. He remembered the castle he grew up in, filled with nasty, nasty people. Then his fingers began to crackle with electricity arching between the tips of his fingers.[/quote]