The reason why I pick Rylai's Crystal Scepter over Rod of Ages is because I find that for RoA to be used to it's full potential, you need that 10 minutes for it to fully charge. It would be a good early game sustain item because of the passive.

Personally, I like getting a Rylai's because of the built in slow so it's easier to chase down people or get away from them.

I personally don't agree with getting Rylai's Crystal Scepter, I like Rod of Ages better.
It gives health, mana and some sustain in lane.

Why buy the Liandry's torment if you do not have the slow? Like the one you get from Rylais Crystal Scepter.

1) As I said in my runes section, the runes you choose are up to you. I personally take the ap per level for more damage late game so this point is invalid.
2) I don't need a faerie charm because I don't go oom. hence why I take the amp tome and pot first. Kage's gives me more gold ontop of my last hits, so no, it is not a waste. Lich bane is built at around 25-30 min into the game. I have a decent amount of AP by then and Lich is doing 200+ damage at that point which is better than the 0 when you don't have it then. Like I said, Rylai's is for the health. I don't need to rush a tear, because again, I don't go oom and by the time I make my archangel's, it's already full stacked. As for a Liandra's, you don't do enough consistent spell damage to make it useful. Hence why I don't get it. I have enough MPen with this build and it works perfectly fine.
3) The points in expanded mind gives me more mana. Like I said. It's more AP to Seraph's passive and you shouldnt need a zhonyas since you shouldnt be attacking head on in team fights anyway.

I was showing my stats with Nid using this build. It's not enough for you to criticize my build, now you have to criticize my W/L.

Before you post something thinking you are so high and mighty and so much better than everyone else, how about you just not post at all. It's a waste of everyones time, and it's unneeded. Like I said at the very beginning of my guide. This is how I play her and it's my understanding of how to play her.

Looking at your activity log on your profile, all I see is negative comments on guides. Don't even bother posting if it's just you're just going to bash other peoples hard work and trying to help others.

Horrible.

1) Why would you take so many scaling AP runes, it's really bad. Armor for yellows, MR for blues and Quints FLAT Ap, gives you much more, a.k.a you don't die when APC / ADC hits you. Your early game isn't focsuing to hit spears that often.

2) Your build is pretty much horrible again. Starting items.. wat? Ok yay now you have around 30~40 AP with flat AP quints, but who cares? You will be dead at some point, and you will run out of mana, extra 200 mana for manapotion isn't gonna help the case. Are you thinking about buying faerie charm first, gives you a nice little boost for manareg and you can now rush tear.

Kage's is pretty much ok if you are losing your lane and can't lasthit, you just wasted 765 gold for nothing if you can lasthit. GZ

Building lich bane early is pretty bad, it wont do any damage since it scales how much AP you have, so Lich Bane is better if you build it later on the game.

Rylai is pretty ok but don't rush it, you lose so much damage again, the slow isn't that good either at early levels.

Other items are prtty fine, but ever thought about building tear -> haunting guise -> sorc shoes -> raba -> blasting wand - arch angle a.k.a seraph's -> void staff -> zhonya -> liandry's torment? This build gives you fair amount of mana that you will need, MPen for hitting harder, damage ofc and some defensive items =)

3) No point taking 3 points to the Expanded mind if you're using active items like seraph's and zhonyas.

Btw your rankeds (950 - 1000 dunno about last season) are the same as normals, not a worth showing.

(sorry bad english haven't slept)

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate you helping me make this guide better for future viewers.

Personally I think that the items chapter could be divided up and made easier to read while also being more detailed. The wall of text isn't really appealing to read and can be hard to follow. Dividing it up will allow the section to be followed by readers easier and will avoid it from being skipped over so often.

The jumpable walls section was a nice addition however the full map view image is a bit hard to look for the spots - for a moment I didn't think it was edited at all. I would suggest using thicker white circles as opposed to the thin red ones. You could also add directional arrows to the other images.

Well done on the guide though, it's nice! +1