-1 it's a circle not a box.

Bad masteries and Bad runes also half the build is completely unnecessary.

0 coding -1

try using bbc coding instead straight walls of text.

I've included Jhoijhoi's guide on making guides

I've also included a sample guide

all of the coding on the second guide was done through Jhoi's guide, so if you see anything you like, you can find it in her guide.

Hopefully these sources help, see what you like and copy it

This was my first build that I have done so that is probably why it sucks but I will work to improve

Lol, Day since lagger joined: Seeing if at least Half of his comments are not -1s.

Thy sins
1. Haha! I laugh at you!
2. No comment to vote
3. "Standard Start"; If there is a standard one, then where are the alternatives?
4. Leveling your first point of W at lvl 8
5. Seraph's Embrace
6. 24-0-6
7. Your guide has 5 chapters
8. 0 coding
9. Minimal structure
10. "Dark Matter (W): This is a very powerful spell" And yet you won't take it before lvl 8
11. "though it is difficult to use" You have a bloody stun that you max second, that combines really well with your W.
12. Lanes for Veigar? Shouldn't that be laning for Veigar?
13. Nothing in your build is explained. NOTHING!
14. Your first chapter is about farming, gg
15. I still do not like the title
16. I think you know the drill by now

Thy blessing
1. You spelled "farming" correctly

Result: Path of the Infidel
This guide is a complete failure, well done :D

you should add a section that explains item choices and other viable items, also rushing a tear item on veigar is very inefficient, you should just stick to an early tear and build ap till your tear is stacked

Day 794: Still looking for that guide that will get a +1 from Laggermeister .

I don't get how Satella always beats me to these ****ty guides

Lagger hit scout rank :o

-1, text wall, **** masteries and mediocre everything else

Bad masteries and ******ed skill sequence