Tysoon, the Garuda

[quote=Jarulso][i]Champion Name[/i] - [b]Tysoon, the Garuda[/b] ---[i]Statistics[/i]---[list] [*] [b]Health[/b] - 405 (+82) [*] [b]Health Regen.[/b] - 4.3 (+0.5) [*] [b]Mana[/b] - 183 (+29) [*] [b]Mana Regen.[/b] - 6.5 (+0.2) [*] [b]Range[/b] - 130 [*] [b]Attack Damage[/b] - 55.5 (+3.5) [*] [b]Attack Speed[/b] - 0.68 (+3.6%) [*] [b]Armor[/b] - 35 (+1.6) [*] [b]Magic Resist[/b] - 25 (+1.9) [*] [b]Mov. Speed[/b] - 360[/list] ---[i]Abilities[/i]--- ([color=#00ff00][b]Passive[/b][/color]) Wing Speed: Tysoon gains bonus Movement Speed based off his Attack Damage (0.30 AD) ([color=#00ffff][b]Q[/b][/color]) Air Blade: Tysoon pushes out his talon, pushing a razor-sharp gust of air to deal damage to enemies in a cone as Physical Damage. [list] [*] Damage: 80/110/140/170/200 + (0.6 AD) (0.5 AP) [*] Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6 [*] Mana Cost: 65/75/85/95/105 [*] Cone width: 40.5 [*] Range: 820/840/860/880/900 [/list] ([color=#00ffff][b]W[/b][/color]) Ruffle (Passive): After taking three attacks, Tysoon gains bonus Attack Damage for his next two basic attacks. [list] [*] Bonus Damage: 35/50/65/80/95 + (0.4 AD) [/list] ([b][color=#00ffff]E[/color][/b]) Aerobatics: Tysoon flaps his wings as he moves, granting him bonus movement speed for a rising amount of time. In addition, Tysoon’s next attack will cause him to jump over his enemy and deal a vicious attack, dealing bonus damage. [list] [*] Movement Speed Duration: 6/7/8/9/10 seconds. [*] Movement Speed Bonus: 20/25/30/35/40 [*] Bonus Damage: 100/125/150/175/200/225 + (0.25 AD) [*] Cooldown: 11 [*] Cost: 90/115/140/165/190[/list] ([b][color=#ff0000]R[/color][/b]): Hurricane Charge: Tysoon takes off from the ground, and flies forward with massive speed in a straight path. If he hits an enemy champion, he grabs them, and tosses them half the distance he traveled in the opposite direction he came from, before closing in for a powerful strike. If the target is thrown into a wall, they are briefly stunned. If Tysoon travels the maximum distance without hitting a champion, he slams the ground with tremendous force, sending out a blast of air in a circle around him. Tysoon cannot be slowed during this dash, and can pass through walls, minions, monsters and artificially created terrain.[list] [*] Damage (If Champion hit): 225/350/475 (0.85 AD) [*] Damage (AoE): 220/360/500 (0.4 AD) (0.4 AP) [*] Cooldown: 120/102/94 [*] Cost: 160/210/260 [*] Dash Range: 875 [*] Dash Speed: 700 [*] AoE Radius: 750[/list] I am having a bit of trouble for creating Lore for him, but that aside, I'm willing to take any suggestions. ^^ ---[u]CHANGELOG[/u]--- [list] [*] Cleaned up [b][color=#ff0000]Hurricane Charge[/color][/b]'s description, increased Movement Speed bonus from 0.15 to 0.3 for [color=#00ff00][b]Wing Speed[/b][/color]. [*] Tweaked [color=#00ffff][b]Ruffle[/b][/color] so that it procs more frequently (From 5 to 3), and adjusted the AD ratio (From 0.35 to 0.4). [/list][/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe]A champion idea that does not seem rediculously OP, I kinda like it :P I'd even increase the strength of his passive ability to 0.30 AD :D[/quote]

[quote=Teh Grazzh0pper]Q range a bit too insane, and ultimate description is confusing.[/quote]

[quote=DKitten]It looks like the ulti is a long-range skillshot. If he connects, Garuda and his target travel along the line of the skillshot for an additional 50% of the distance traveled (does wall collision start now, or do we still ignore walls?). If he fails to hit a champion target, he does an AoE knockup at max range.[/quote]

[quote=Jarulso][quote=DKitten] It looks like the ulti is a long-range skillshot. If he connects, Garuda and his target travel along the line of the skillshot for an additional 50% of the distance traveled (does wall collision start now, or do we still ignore walls?). If he fails to hit a champion target, he does an AoE knockup at max range. [/quote] Close - When the Skillshot connects, Tysoon will grab his target, and throw them in the opposite direction that he traveled in for 50% of the distance he went. Wall collision does apply to the enemy champion. If he does not, he performs the AoE at Max Range, but doesn't apply any crowd control effects. I was thinking knock-back originally, but it just seems unnecessary. [quote=Teh Grazzh0pper] Q range a bit too insane, and ultimate description is confusing. [/quote] I intended for the Q to be over [[corki]]'s [[valkyrie]], but much shorter than [[ashe]]'s [[volley]] at Max Level, signifying his increased effectiveness with being able to create razor-sharp air as he levels the skill up. However, I'm open for any suggestions to a different range. As for the Ultimate Description - I'll tidy that up for clarification. ^^ [quote=Meiyjhe] A champion idea that does not seem rediculously OP, I kinda like it :P I'd even increase the strength of his passive ability to 0.30 AD :D [/quote] I'll make the adjustments now! c:[/quote]

[quote=DKitten]So is it: →→→→→→target ...←←← Or is it: →→→→→→target ......→→→[/quote]

[quote=Jarulso][quote=DKitten] So is it: →→→→→→target ...←←← [/quote] That's the one. ^^[/quote]

[quote=rudyards]I really like his kit. His W seems a little meh however. Maybe add an activated part, or make it proc more often?[/quote]

[quote=Jarulso]I can't think of an activate off the top of my head, so I'll tweak the proc. ^^[/quote]

[quote=rudyards]That seems better! Alternatively, you could have it work like Nocturne's passive, where it procs based on time or number of attacks.[/quote]