TRUeLM
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Alright, for starters : Don't use imageshack to upload tags. Most people don't know this, but an image uploading website only has the ability to copy a certain amount of quality. Imageshack...just isn't the place you want.
Instead, try Photobucket or Deviant art.
That aside, the actual comments of your work begin here:
Tag 1
This is just a mess. At both times it manages to be both too bright and too dark. Your light source in on the extreme side, and your burning is just...wrong, to be blunt. Try observing your stock/render to get the idea of what should be darkened and where your light source should go.
Your text is pretty bad too, but thats understandable. Nearly everyone has trouble with text, it's kind of like a universal thing, so just work on it. HOWEVER, the black lines scattered across your tag are plain horrible. Nothing throws off the flow of a tag like random **** added on. Take them off, or leave them if you feel like having uh...some ****py black lines everywhere.
And blending. Oh, how people aren't very good with this. Considering that that is most likely a stock, you should have easily been able to blend it in a bit more. Typical things in this area are smudging and such.
Also, you seem to have a lack of effects. While this is all good and nice that there ARE effects present in the stock already, they're bland...and quite flat. Perhaps you should find some nice c4d's and apply them for extra effect.
While I would have liked to write more cnc for your other two tag's, there simply isn't enough in difference to say much else. Each of your tags suffers from the topics presented above. I feel that if you applied some of those ideas, you would end up with a much greater result.
Overall, KIU, and welcome to the forums.
Instead, try Photobucket or Deviant art.
That aside, the actual comments of your work begin here:
Tag 1
This is just a mess. At both times it manages to be both too bright and too dark. Your light source in on the extreme side, and your burning is just...wrong, to be blunt. Try observing your stock/render to get the idea of what should be darkened and where your light source should go.
Your text is pretty bad too, but thats understandable. Nearly everyone has trouble with text, it's kind of like a universal thing, so just work on it. HOWEVER, the black lines scattered across your tag are plain horrible. Nothing throws off the flow of a tag like random **** added on. Take them off, or leave them if you feel like having uh...some ****py black lines everywhere.
And blending. Oh, how people aren't very good with this. Considering that that is most likely a stock, you should have easily been able to blend it in a bit more. Typical things in this area are smudging and such.
Also, you seem to have a lack of effects. While this is all good and nice that there ARE effects present in the stock already, they're bland...and quite flat. Perhaps you should find some nice c4d's and apply them for extra effect.
While I would have liked to write more cnc for your other two tag's, there simply isn't enough in difference to say much else. Each of your tags suffers from the topics presented above. I feel that if you applied some of those ideas, you would end up with a much greater result.
Overall, KIU, and welcome to the forums.
Kibblinator
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TRUeLM wrote:
Alright, for starters : Don't use imageshack to upload tags. Most people don't know this, but an image uploading website only has the ability to copy a certain amount of quality. Imageshack...just isn't the place you want.
Instead, try Photobucket or Deviant art.
That aside, the actual comments of your work begin here:
Tag 1
This is just a mess. At both times it manages to be both too bright and too dark. Your light source in on the extreme side, and your burning is just...wrong, to be blunt. Try observing your stock/render to get the idea of what should be darkened and where your light source should go.
Your text is pretty bad too, but thats understandable. Nearly everyone has trouble with text, it's kind of like a universal thing, so just work on it. HOWEVER, the black lines scattered across your tag are plain horrible. Nothing throws off the flow of a tag like random **** added on. Take them off, or leave them if you feel like having uh...some ****py black lines everywhere.
And blending. Oh, how people aren't very good with this. Considering that that is most likely a stock, you should have easily been able to blend it in a bit more. Typical things in this area are smudging and such.
Also, you seem to have a lack of effects. While this is all good and nice that there ARE effects present in the stock already, they're bland...and quite flat. Perhaps you should find some nice c4d's and apply them for extra effect.
While I would have liked to write more cnc for your other two tag's, there simply isn't enough in difference to say much else. Each of your tags suffers from the topics presented above. I feel that if you applied some of those ideas, you would end up with a much greater result.
Overall, KIU, and welcome to the forums.
:'O
TRUeLM
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Kibblinator
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TRUeLM wrote:
Wut did I do? D:
I just tried to help the fellow out, that's all. SIGH, I keep forgetting that some people aren't very good with constructive criticism. If I offended the OP, I'm sorry.
D:
You were just so detailed i skyrocketed off my chair and got my head stuck in the ceiling. After the repairs, only one emote could describe what i had been through:
:O
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btw how can I show my pictures in here and not in a link form? when I try post it as image here it doesnt show