By easy to read you mean aesthetic?

Just need some format changes.

Also, like others said, think about Ravenous Hydra :) it is essentially your 5th Spell.

Wrong.

Think about who actually reads the guides and uses them. Noobs who have no idea what they're doing. In fact, if you think about it carefully, most people will just look at the cheatsheet and go with that.

So actually, normal people would like a nice simple guide that's easy to read if they're going to read it at all.

Thus, normal people like both a correctly written guide and an easily read guide.

Walls of text!

Sure it must have pictures and stuff but still the information is much more valuable than the aesthetics. For instance normal people would rather prefer a well written guide but not that aesthetic instead of a fancy guide with the worst information you can get(there are some people who are mentally disabled and would choose the second one).

People look for both. It is important to write a good guide, and it is also important to make it visually appealing. If there are no pictures or anything to keep peoples' attention, they will often go a guide that is easier to read, even if the first guide is great.

I've also seen people say that complaining about walls of text is like complaining about books. If people wanted to read a book, they would read a book.

I don't really know why people look for aesthetics instead of a well written guide...

The build looks fine, although I suggest replacing the second Bloodthirster with a Ravenous Hydra; is essentially gives you another spell.

The guide itself is pretty short. It's also a bit of a wall of text. Add some pictures and BB code, and it'll be much better. Also, the section on Talon's burst is unneeded; remove it.

Have you read jhoijhoi's guide to make a guide? You should really implement some bbcoding. Build seems ok but 2 bt's - really? No alternatives in the cheatsheet. Guide ends very apruptly. The burst is not too interesting, id do it under .

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You should also read this.

No vote for now but if you want more advice feel free to pm me!

edit: this could mabe help you too. If you aren't too lazy and interested more into the whole guidewriting thingy have a look at this.

Thanks for the advice!

As I main jungle, if I see someone that counters my laner start without any wards, I will abuse him since if you counter your enemy you will be confident enough to push your wave. This is how you get free kills. I'd recommend you start Rejuvenation Bead + potions and two wards. Later on build it into a Ravenous Hydra since it gives you a much bigger bursting potential than Bloodthirster. How you may ask, it's simple:
It already gives you 75 AD which is a really high amount. Bloodthirster can give you 100 AD but 75 AD + the active is much better than that 100 AD. You can try and add more to the guide as it seems quite incomplete...