[Champion Concept] Jean Paul, The Dictator

[quote=Ryumanyamana][U][B]Stats:[/B][/U] Base Health: 435 Health Per Level: +87 Base Health Regen per 5 Seconds: 7.45 Health Regen per 5 seconds: +9 Base Atack Damage: 51 Attack Damage Per Level: +3.5 Base Attack Speed: .643 Attack Speed Per Level: +2.5% Base Armor: 14 Armor Per Level: +3.1 Base Magic Resistance: 30 Magic Reistance Per Level: +1 Base Movement Speed: 345 Range: 125 Passive - Rising Power: After every 5 consecutive abilities casted, he'll heal on his next auto-attack for 5% of his health. [U][B]Q - Death Grasp:[/B][/U] Jean-Paul will dash in a skill shot of 700 distance long and 200 distance wide. First enemy he collides with will be briefly be held in mid-air for .1 seconds while Jean-Paul holds them up chocking them in mid-air with 1 hand(targetable). After .1 seconds the enemy will explode in his hands taking (65/105/145/195/225)+40% AP damage finally being released from his grip, they will be stunned for .4 seconds. Missile Speed: 1000 COOLDOWN: 15/13.5/11.5/9.5/8.5 seconds [U][B]W - Power Shield(active):[/B][/U] Jean-Paul deals (90/130/170/190/200)+40%AP damage around himself sucking enemies towards him for 100 distance that are within a 400 radius around him for .5 seconds. Damage dealted to enemies after magic resist, armor, armor pen., and magic pen. taken into account, he'll receive a shield equal to quarter the amount of total magic damage he dealted to enemy champions with the ability. COOLDOWN: 7 seconds [U][B]E - Burning Fear(active):[/B][/U] (I'm just making changes at the moment and I have to get to other business because of short time so here it is) Jean Paul's next autoattack will deal 60/70/80/90/100(+%30 AP) on an enemy and will deal 90% splash damage to everybody around it within 300 distance. COOLDOWN: 10/9.5/9/8.5/8 seconds [U][B]R - Destruction(active):[/B][/U] He'll gain 20/30/40 AP and an increased 10% ap ratio on all of his abilties. After waiting 1.25 seconds, the next cast on this ability is a targeted ability. Jean-Paul rushes to an enemy's location that is within 475 range, by first grabbing them and jumping in the air then eventually piledriving back down. Although this renders the target vulnerable to Jean's ally's attacks while in mid-air the target can't cleanse themselves to break free but they can get receive active ability buffs and cleanses from allied champions. The targeted champion will take 178/217/256+100% AP magic damage and be slowed for 25/35/45% movement speed for 2 seconds upon landing. Along with landing he'll knock up enemy units around himself within 300 distance radius for 1 second and deal half the magic damage he dealted to his main target. COOLDOWN: 90/80/70 [U][B]LORE:[/B][/U] Riot can fill up most of the lore but mainly: Nobody of Runeterra knew where Jean Paul's exact origins were but they can all agree on one thing, He's a force to be reckoned with. Very few claim that they saw his army (Which is known as "The Scarlet Replublic") suddenly flooded into the Shurima dessert through a wormhole claiming every part of the territory his own while progressively expanding his camps covering vast distances. Rumors started to spread all over that he plans on taking over Runeterra by first conquering the Freljord knowing they're in a conflict amongst themselves. At the end, some say he's cruel... some say he's revolting... and some say he's insane... At the end his power grows. [i]" All of Runeterra thinks they know great power, they just have not seen mine yet." - Jean Paul[/i] [U][B]Quotes[/B][/U]: I'm just coming up with them as it goes Q: "Die scum!" W: "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"(Insane laughter if he damages 4-5 champions with the shield) E: "SUFFER UNDER MY COMMAND!" R: "Death... Awaits..."(First cast on ult) "THIS PLACE SHALL BECOME YOUR GRAVE!"(Upon landing with his targeted enemy) Taunt: (in front of Ahri) "Aaah, *whistles*[i]Ma belle dame![/i] Don't be afraid, you've charmed this old fox eons ago!" (In front of Teemo) "Oh you little scum, just wait until I come back even more tenacious. I will cram those drugs down your pipe. (In front of 4 enemy champions with his team near him and the game detects he's building more tankiness than damage) "Come on, all of you! Use all of your strength on me and see what happens" (Regular Taunt): *floats in the air* My power knows no limits! PAH! Just try to stop me. I've spent some time on this some months ago and I'm still a bit unsure about his kit. What I aim for is making him into having 2 options of turning into a risky semi-tank high damage aoe damager or a full tank with devastating sustain and presence. Once again I'm still foggy on the LoL Meta. I've made these changes just now and I don't have much time atm.[/quote]

[quote=Mooninites]Wow, I'm surprised riot hasn't hired you already[/quote]

[quote=DillButt64]so basically his passive says, if you use skills you kill yourself therefore if you harass and if you get counterharassed you instantly lose the trade because now you have lower hp regen for 4+ seconds also how in the hell is he going to get 100 "mutilation" if each of his abilities have higher than a 4 second cool down it took you months to think of this champion yet you didnt even fix his broken resource system, congrats[/quote]

[quote=Azalea][quote=DillButt64] so basically his passive says, if you use skills you kill yourself [/quote] I AM LITERALLY CRYING RN B/C THIS IS SO FUNNY OMFG LOL[/quote]

[quote=drakon136][quote=Azalea] [quote=DillButt64] so basically his passive says, if you use skills you kill yourself [/quote] I AM LITERALLY CRYING RN B/C THIS IS SO FUNNY OMFG LOL [/quote] It's so funny I forgot to laugh.[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana][quote=DillButt64] so basically his passive says, if you use skills you kill yourself therefore if you harass and if you get counterharassed you instantly lose the trade because now you have lower hp regen for 4+ seconds also how in the hell is he going to get 100 "mutilation" if each of his abilities have higher than a 4 second cool down it took you months to think of this champion yet you didnt even fix his broken resource system, congrats [/quote] Crap you're right. I stopped working on him between that very long gap of months and I didn't work long enough on his passive because I didn't have the time to think about it for a long time. Thanks I just knew there was something wrong but I couldn't see it DX. It was kinda hard to see every single mistake and to iron it out by myself. Can you tell me more stuff that is wrong with this because I've attempted many champion concepts but I pretty much failed hard at all of them. How can I make it so that his passive makes him powerful yet prevents him from being a spam master in lane?[/quote]

[quote=DillButt64]i think giving him a passive that kills him is one thing that isnt that great, im currently thinking of a champion that runs on a different resource so i know how awkward it is to try and make one that isnt op the thing thats wrong with his passive is that it has more negatives than positives, he loses hp regen, when hes full he loses 10% of his hp, for what? 40% extra damage(btw thats wtf strong) Rumble has a similar passive, using too many skills forces him to go on a "cooldown" but during that cooldown he has extra damage on his autos so its a decent trade-off, with your champions current passive youre better off not using any skills i really dont know how you would make a passive for this guy thats similar to the one you have but you could do what they did with other manaless champions, give them a bad earlygame by having high cooldowns (which is what it looks like you have), or by giving them a nonoptimal late game to make up for being a good lane bully (i.e. garen) as for Q you basically cc yourself, i wouldnt give a timer on it just let him do it sort of, instantly i guess, also add some cc to it like a stun or slow or something, he doesnt have any cc outside of his ultimate, which isnt good for what looks like an ap tank (like sej, naut, etc) W seems fine but you dont need all that "after resistances" thing, just say "and will have a shield for a quarter of the damage dealt" E doesnt really make much sense, i dont know if this champion is going to be a top laner or a jungler but the only time this ability would be helpful is if hes a jungler since Q and W dont work on minions or monsters, reminds me sort of like kass's W/passive, its kind of ignored since you arnt autoattacking much and kass's passive is mainly for the 15% magic resist R is a fine ult just take out the whole "mutilation to 100 double bonus" thing thats just obnoxious, the active is good enough for an ult, sort of like a vi ult except the damage to others comes from dropping after rather than the charge into[/quote]

[quote=Sporner]looking at the loore i'd think you would like some ideas from the first champion idea i posted here for your champion: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/theory-crafting/terrorizing-the-small-champion-idea-26406]terrorizing the small[/url] my concept is far from completed, but i'd like to see some of my ideas put to better use...[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana]I'm not sure on this but is okay if I make him heal to make up for his long cooldowns so he can stay in lane. Also is it also viable to just add more splash damage with a strong 1 hit punch?(btw ima change it later so if he waits 4 seconds, he gets back the ability at half cooldown, I'm really short on time)[/quote]