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Creator: Tychus January 5, 2014 5:05pm
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Hey guys, I just created my very first guide and I am sure there are mistakes and things I did wrong such as coding and all those stuffs. If any one could take a look and tell me what he thinks, I would apreciate.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/activate-your-master-yi-367794
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I this might be against the rules for advertising?
If I helped you please leave me a +Rep.

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Yes, it's against the rules - this topic will probably be deleted soon.

Don't worry about it though OP - when I started here I did the same thing and look at where I am now ;D

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

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Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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IceCreamy wrote:

Yes, it's against the rules - this topic will probably be deleted soon.

Don't worry about it though OP - when I started here I did the same thing and look at where I am now ;D


By the way, where are the rules for advertising? I would like to take a look at them :P
If I helped you please leave me a +Rep.

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DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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IceCreamy wrote:

Yes, it's against the rules - this topic will probably be deleted soon.

Don't worry about it though OP - when I started here I did the same thing and look at where I am now ;D


lol u r 2 meters high

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But i had posted the same post in general and they warnded me, and told me i could do it here because it is for feed back and help... so... Im new to this sorry ._. i dont get it quite yet XD
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There's a difference between "Hey guys here's my guide pls comment and upvote" and "Hey guys, I have a problem with my item build for Ashe and coding for the mastery section in my guide, could you help me out?" :)

But it's k, all beginning is difficult ^^

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Specific questions. Not "look at my guide and tell me what you think", but for example:
  • I'm unsure about whether the runes I'm using on <Champion X> are optimal, thoughts?
  • I've tried both a 21/9/0 and a 9/21/0 mastery setup but am not sure which one I prefer, what do you guys use?
  • The coding in my Runes section isn't what I want it to be, but I'm not sure how to make it look better. Help!

I'll leave the thread up for now, but you better start asking specific questions, otherwise it'll be gone soonTM

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So what do you guys think about the items? some one commented that I should suggest some defensive items, but other than Guardian Angel I think deffensive items are a waste, any ideas?
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