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Cheatsheet: 13/20
6/10 item picks + structure
Seems okay but there are no point of having 2 cheatsheet, you could do a "Starting Items #1" and "Starting Items #2".
7/10 the rest
Structure + coding: 12/15
8/10 uses of overviews, schemes and other uses of structure
Seems nice though, but it'll be more better if you add some pictures/banners.
4/5 uses of coding
Good.
Content: 26/50
10/25 Full Build Quality Explanation
You missed out some important chapters such as: Runes, Masteries, Summoner's Spells. The "Items Chapter" has no information on each items you build as your core.
14/20 Tactical Quality Explanation
Yup, you provide tips and tricks and Laning Phase, but it'll be better if you add more.
2/5 Quantity content
Like I said, you missed out some important chapters.
Bonus: 9/15
0/5 bonus chapters (matchups and synergy chapters)
You have none.
4/5 Originality
Yup.
5/5 attitude towards the readers (wants to improve)
Yup(You also appologize for being ignorant :p)
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Result: Path of the Student (60/100)
You did well on your first guide but it still lacks some important chapters, you should explain the items on your core build, and I also suggest you to add Match-ups and/or Synergies Chapter if you can. I'll change my vote if you did what I said, pm me or leave a comment on my review shop if you need a rereview and you've add those important chapters.
Good Luck ^^
Tbh, even though
I'm not sure why, but you don't use the [[insert item/skill/mastery/rune/summoner spell/champion]] tags very often. You're missing some important sections on your guide, namely, runes, summoner spells, masteries and skill sequence. I think that even on a safer 'standard'
Why does your items chart repeat itself?
I think your thinking that you should always aim for the carries in a fight is the way to go because they're usually safely tucked into a position wherein if you fail to get a kill, you'll most likely die. I think a better way to phrase is "aim for anyone you can burst safely". It's important to keep in mind that her ult is really easy to interrupt.
You have a few coding, grammatical, and spelling errors here and there.
To conclude, your guide still needs a lot of work. It's getting there though, and it isn't the worst. In any case, good luck with your guide.
Are kidding?!?!
The item itself is worth 624 gold, and you get it for only 440 gold along with an extra
It takes 60 seconds for 4
It will take about 3 minutes to regenerate 600 health with
Actually boots of speed give a lot of movement speed if you have movement speed quitessences, and it's just my personal preference. But now that I think about it
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Sorry about being ignorant :/
Thanks for the comments guys! here are the explainations below vvvvv
Yea I was gonna add a custom table of contents but then I got confused and forgot to add it in the end my bad >_< but I will work on fixing it asap. :D
Are kidding?!?!
The item itself is worth 624 gold, and you get it for only 440 gold along with an extra
It takes 60 seconds for 4
It will take about 3 minutes to regenerate 600 health with
Lovely guide!
I would like to talk about a few things though:
Good luck with the guide!
Adding onto that^ you also lack a table of contents
Yea I was gonna add a custom table of contents but then I got confused and forgot to add it in the end my bad >_< but I will work on fixing it asap. :D
Lovely guide!
I would like to talk about a few things though:
Good luck with the guide!