use [color=transparent] instead of [color=black] in the introduction section. example below


you aren't very good at colours if u no know transparent transparent

Thy sins
1. Dark blue doesn't go well on a dark background @introduction.
2. "These are fairly standard masteries for a jungler." Except they aren't. Afaik people do more Legendary Guardian and less Oppression . I can assume that that is because Sion has a bunch of CC himself, but I shouldn't have to assume that in the first place.
3. Rune section extremely short. I am pretty damn sure there are alternative options. Show them and explain them properly. (Eg Health Seals, penetration marks, CDR glyphs, flat MR glyphs etc.)
4. Refrain from doubling item explanations, even if you refer to them. In the cheatsheet you put in what is damage and what is defense, stick with that approach please. So Iceborn Gauntlet for example should be only under damage.
5. The damage items aren't greatly explained. You pick up the Hydra because of its massive AD and aoe. Do you want more splitpushing power and/or clearing power? Hydra is the choice. I myself am also not entirely convinced by the Youmuu's ghostblade. Why do you pick it over the rest and when do you pick it over the rest? I have no clue
6. Starting items and trinkets not explained in the guide.
7. Summaries belong at the top of the guide, not the bottom.
8. "You can even invade if you feel your team can do it, but I won't be going over it in this guide." Except you should
9. You talk only about the dragon whereas there are way more objectives. When do I farm? When do I gank? When do I splitpush? When do I group up? When do I counterjungle? What about Baron? So many questions, so little answers.
10. The lategame section is extremely poor. Like nothing matters anymore than just teamfights. Even then, you do not even explain the teamfights and how you should handle them.

Thy blessing
1. Build seems fine
2. C2V
3. Well-structured cheatsheet
4. All basics included
5. Good use of coding and structure

Result: Path of the Student
The tactical section is extremely poor, although the build sections, build itself and structure seems okay. You are allowed to go way deeper into the tactics, because this is very important stuff. I want to know what I have to do with Sion, when and how I can do it, whereas this guide only shows that very general in the ability section.

There is lots to improve so I suggest you start working!
Good luck!
-Meiyjhe

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༼ຈل͜├┬┴┬┴ psst, want some free graphics?

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