Actually I look at the cheat sheet first and if it has obvious mistakes I don't even read the rest of the guide.

I can beat Laggermeister for the least amount of words used to downvote a guide.

For example:

Walls of Text -1

This is my first build so i don't have that much expierence. I'm still learning. Thanks for letting me know guys. Gladly appreciate it.

Thou sins
1. No comment to vote
2. You didn't explain anything at all about your build. Explain your abilities, your summoner spells, your runes, your masteries and of course, your items.
3. 0 coding
4. Walls of text
5. Akali barely benefit's from Juggernaut at all. Besides, Akali is more a killer assassin than a tanky bruiser, better go offense instead of defense.

Thou blessing
1. "Okay" cheatsheet
2. Good use of titles

Result: Path of Redemption
There is too much missing.
The main things you gotta do right now is including all the basics, which are within your 2. sin.
Add some coding aswell, or else no one will actually try to read it, and that is not very awesome indeed.
The good use of titles show you can make a good structure, now do it, make your guide handsome :D

Have fun :D

Wrong masteries wrong skill sequence -1

The text wall with no formatting will make people tl;dr this guide and possibly downvote you; even though you give a lot of tips in the guide, they don't stand out and it's easy to miss.

I'm also not really on board with the choice of DFG instead of a survival item. Or the masteries.