Ok, sorry and thanks for your feedback, and ill try to improve this. it is not fully finished, and I am going to apply some of your criteria to my guide. I am sorry you disliked it, and I hope to improve it in the future. ;)

I dislike it when people mention every single summoner spell and just say that most of them are bad and you should't use them, it's a waste of your time and the reader's time.

Your build path is very poor as you mention no other items or build paths. You should never just have a single build path expecially if it's rushing sunfire cape as that can be a poor choice against a team with double ap and a jungler like skarner, nunu or maokai. Also you get boots so late in your build. I think their are the first things you should get when you recall first.

Regarding your skill order you don't say why you level up your skills in a certain order so, I would like to know why you level up your w over your q as his q is pretty bad without any levels yet your w is still ok.

Regarding your runes, your marks give you just over 30 hp which is pretty much nothing. I would recommend armour marks over them. Also ap per level seals are a very poor choice on every jungler in the game as armour seals outclass them entirely. The ap quintessences are also outclassed by movement speed quints.
You also made a mistake with you coding in the pros/cons section aswell as the jungling section.